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Jun 26, 2006 13:16

TITLE: First Kiss ( Read more... )

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bcatjr March 8 2007, 18:11:26 UTC
So sweet!!! I loved this. After all this time, it is still a pleasure to read about those first times they shared, what happened in those moments we were never privy to.

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t_wistfulheart May 30 2007, 03:01:45 UTC
Finally, lovingly, he presses his mouth against his lover’s mouth, savours the kiss until Ennis shakes his head and turns away.
He wants to curl up on Ennis’s shoulder, feel the rise and fall of his chest, hear the beating of his heart, but he knows instinctively that this one, his Ennis del Mar with the low startle point, will still need careful handling.

Love that. Reminds me of a cowboy training a young horse - little by little. First just throwing an arm over its back. Then later, maybe leaning a little more weight. Easing things along until the horse learns to accept (and later appreciate) the handling. :)

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First Kiss anonymous July 5 2009, 04:02:03 UTC
This is good stuff! Laundry duties indeed! Boy, I bet the water was ice cold.

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ennisandjack21 August 20 2023, 14:29:42 UTC
this is so sweet!

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