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Feb 14, 2008 00:52

Just a quick response to recent events. It's not especially original but it made me feel better to write it.

THE WATCHER AND THE WAKER

He sat on a fallen log, a small bundle of nervous energy, booted foot tapping impatiently. A cigarette dangled from the fingers of his right hand, whiskey bottle from the left; both were little more than props. As ( Read more... )

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zucchini11 February 13 2008, 15:29:29 UTC
wildcolumbine,
you are one of my favorite writers in this fandom. Thank you.

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the watcher and the waker bijou16 February 13 2008, 17:19:11 UTC
hi wild columbine,
that was beautiful and it made me cry again.
jack comforting and being ther for heath.
thanks,teresa

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blueparka February 13 2008, 17:58:28 UTC
"He leaned down and kissed away the tears, buried his face in the soft hair, the delicate cluster of curls upon the temple, and murmured softly.
-- Not as good-looking as him, but then no-one ever was. But you done him proud, done us both proud, and folks won't forget that. You sure earned those stars in your crown."
What a wonderful little story. Jack, the healer, as usual, speaks for our unhappyness.
As a stupid observation, I wish the character he was playing in Gilliam's film were blond and without the black moustache.

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sweetje February 13 2008, 18:13:02 UTC
This is incredibly sensitive and beautiful. Thank you for this thoughtful piece. I really loved reading it. : )
Debra

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lalaynia February 13 2008, 18:27:38 UTC
This was a kind, thoughtful and loving story.

Thank you.

-Joan

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