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[wildcolumbine]

THE OUTLAND

Genre: AU
Rating: NC-17 for m/m sex and language
Feedback: Any and all is welcome
Disclaimer: These are Annie Proulx's brilliant original characters and her story, and I have treated it and them (and her) with as much respect as I can muster.

This story is for Canstandit, with thanks for her ongoing support and help.

Comments

[acquaalta]

Oh gosh ... the cumquat's liquer metaphor is simply gorgeous.
And all other stuff. The different ways of weather perception. The hay makig, the way they spend the evenings on the couch ... I love your everyday life descriptions.
And the story in between even more.
Thanks for the long awaited update.
All the best, B.

[ramona4jake]

Sweet chapter, even with the pox and all ! ;) I like it when they are happy !
Thank you so much !

[adahleah]

i can appreciate the realness of this chapter with the std. thanks for the update.

[trekfan]

WOW an std I think this was a first in BBM fanfic. I thought they'd wait until after they visited the clinic for any hanky panky.

I can't wait for Ennis visit to the clinic.

I think it's great Jack is leaving everything to Ennis and Rob, this is his family.

more please

[anony_mouse19]

**"Ah Jesus, you didn't go down on the cunt? Tell me you didn't! Ugh! I kissed that mouth." Ennis shook his head, mouth wrinkled in disgust.** this made me laugh a lot.both what Jack said and Ennis' answer.lol.yea that'd be unforgivable :P
**a long, slow fuck all the way to heaven** loved this.i love your how you write sex.

and i liked all the changes in Ennis.how he feels he's in love.and he fully realizes that he hurt the people who loved him in the past.
their talk and just how they were in the end was so nice.

thank you.