Special Infected - Nick/Ellis - L4D2 - Part 2

[wilde_shade]

A/N: FFFFF. I'm having such an awful week. And, to exacerbate the matter, my house is 500 fucking degrees. And when an expletive is a unit of measurement, you know shit just got real. No AC. Constant construction outside. This nonsense Epic is up to. I am in a foul mood... So leave comments! :D

Seriously though. I'm about to cut a bitch.

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Comments

[escargotage]

I really want to know what Nick and the rest did to get out of the hospital. Large-scale riot? I like how you cut back and forth between past and present, keeps things interesting.

Coach also seems oddly unphased by the whole revelation that Nick and Ellis are fucking each other. I guess he'd be okay with it after some time, but I don't know. *shrug*

I do look forward to more, and I hope you feel better. I can't do anything about the heat, but I can offer my best wishes! :c

[wilde_shade]

Thanks for the comment!

Coach doesn't actually know they're fucking. Nick thought he knew at first, realized Coach just thought they'd done some perfectly heterosexual male bonding while they were stuck together at the hospital, and relaxed. It might have been vague. If so, my bad.

Even if he'd known and had time to process it, I can't imagine someone like Coach ever being 100% cool and comfortable with a piece of information like that.

[lizziero]

Fffff. This is the best fucking thing I have ever read in my life, and if you ever stop writing it without finishing it I will cry for days.

[wilde_shade]

Thanks :D

If everything is all plotted out in my head correctly, there should be two more parts. Unless I die of heat exhaustion or wander off, they should be coming along eventually.

[lizardoo]

oh, Nick, the man that will push someone off the bed and then call them an asshat.

This story is really interesting-- I have a hunch about what happened to that guy that woke up dead, but i might just be overthinking things hahaha

can't wait for more :D

[wilde_shade]

Thanks for the comment :D

You're probably overthinking it. He didn't suddenly become a zombie if that's what you're guessing. He just died for foreshadowing because I'm an ass to tertiary OCs like that.

[lizardoo]

DARN IT

[scythequeen]

Awesome chapter, I really like where you're going with it so far and agree with escargotage that the current/flashback format is very interesting.
I had a good lol over the idea of strip uno, and way to tease with that almost top!Ellis bit.

Loving this fic, keep up the good work.

[wilde_shade]

Thanks!

Strip Uno is the bomb. I used to play it in Girl Scouts... Don't ask.

[floatinginjoy]

I freaking love this fic so hard. <3
I would give some useful feedback, but right now all I can say is
MOAR.
:D