Special Infected - Nick/Ellis - L4D2 - Part 3

[wilde_shade]

A/N: Well, it took a little while but here it is. One more entry left, but that one will probably take just as long. I'm in the process of moving. I've been packing for the last couple of weeks. We have a truck rented out for this weekend. We're heading back to Georgia where we shall be renting our first just-to-ourselves/no room mates home... a

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[zphal_girl87]

Somehow I missed part two... don't know how that happened, so I got to read it and this at the same time. Where I was feeling sort of lost and confused the first part, I was better able to get into it these next two and now I'm sort of gripped by it. I feel like some of your sentences lack clarity, lack a solid... iono... but in the end, what with the fic being the way it is, it seems to add to it in a good way. o_O Anyway, I really like it; that and the pacing that the back and forth creates.

And may I say I loved the cuts back and forth between the two sex scenes? Oh yes, yes I did. <3

You also make me laugh in places and I really appreciate that, considering the seriousness of the situation. Great comedic relief. Like "post-post-apocalypse".

Anyway, yes, eagerly awaiting... the conclusion, is it?

[wilde_shade]

Thanks for the comment :D

Fanfiction is like a happy little writing vacation. When I'm just writing for the sake of writing, I like being a little stream-of-consciencey (That's a word now.) and I LOVE to abuse commas. If it fits then, yay.

I was wrestling with myself for a little bit over whether I wanted two explicitly smutty scenes... but that seemed like an awful lot of smut for one chapter, and I wasn't feeling clever enough to make it work...

And, yes, next installment should be the conclusion.

[zphal_girl87]

Writing is definitely an escape, I quite agree. <3

I luff smut. Haha.

[wilde_shade]

Writing fanfiction is. Writing anything else is guaranteed to give me mountains of grief. I've got one half-finished manuscript and a folder full of unpublished short stories hassling me like bastard children right now. Fanfiction is a totally welcome distraction... as long as I finish it before I start feeling all neglectful and guilty... >.>

I think that come out in coherent English. I can't tell. I seem to have gotten myself a bit high on daytime cold medicine.

[wisecracks]

Oh snap, Memorex!

Still love it. Love the "voice" of it. I only frowned on the Rochelle thing, but i guess Nick was severely concussed by a Tank prior.

[wilde_shade]

Lol, thanks.

Don't give Nick a hard time. >.> I've called my boyfriend the wrong name twice. And one of those times, I called him a chick's name. Luckily, I'm not sure guys actually care enough to stop everything and huff out of the room to sulk.

[wisecracks]

Late reply is laaaate.

But lol how the hell does that happen? Does you mind wander during it? Like the train of thought goes "Oooh yeah, yeah, fuck, a little left, no, there, oh shit did i leave the gas on? Ooh. No, no, i'm good. Yeah. Was someone supposed to come over tomorrow? Who was--ahh--that? Mmm." and then it hits you: "OH, CABLE MAN!"

[wilde_shade]

Late reply is also late.

It happens when you have a mind that wanders... like mine... or if you've been hanging out with someone else all day and you're just getting home to your boyfriend... or something. Whatever.

Honest mistake. >.>

[livelife_2010]

Let me start off by saying: Holy shit, this chapter was intense

[wilde_shade]

Don't apologize for long comments. I love love love them.

All will indeed be revealed soon... After I get all this moving nonsense finished.

[scythequeen]

Another excellent chapter, you are doing a wonderful job getting me all worked up over the conflict and drama happening. I continuously found myself worrying about if the boys would be okay during the flashbacks even though I already knew that they made it out alive and in one piece