I don't know how to express to you what I'm feeling because it's too much and I'm not good with words so I'll just say thank you for writing something so heartbreaking and beautiful. Thank you.
one of the most amazing things I have ever read, everything I want to say to this is incoherent and unworthy and can't actually demonstrate how flawless this was. I wanted to write this in caps lock to reiterate how incredible your writing is but I hate caps lock and it looks ugly so I'll just say thank you for this fic x 1000.
After this bit the problem with london is that she’s gorgeous and darling and she’ll suck your cock until you stop paying her. then you start to see that when you look behind the right lighting, the good manners, it’s cold and filthy, but by then she’ll have left you penniless and…empty. I think I actually fell in love with you because you write everything I want to write and feel what I want to feel and I had to pause for a while and read over the whole thing again with new eyes because it was all so heart breaking and wonderful,
but thank you again for posting, am going to friend so I know when/what you're writing!
i am not ok. i am not ok. i am noT OK. i cried???? like i can't remember the last time i cried while reading a fic??? it's been a while. wow. i'm a mess. i'm not. ok.
omg???? can i please say this was probably one of my favorite comments because of the reaction?
please...i - please be okay???? i'm so sorry that you cried i didn't mean to make anyone cry! but i'm glad you're so emotionally invested in it and thank you for reading even though it made you cry!
Okay, so i really really really enjoyed this. I loved so many things about it and i'm going to try and dictate that but whew. whew
i loved that you didn't feel - obliged? right word? - to introduce us to all the characters in turn. i loved that louis was talked about but liam never really met him (unless this moment: liam sees sunrise and tanned, elfin hands lifting him into a warm, bright-colored car, his head pillowed by a stack of shakespeare leatherbounds and a musical voice prattering to a beatles song. was real in case yes. yes. i think it was. i like to think louis would pick strange boys who aren't ready for the world, up at pubs and drive them home), but more importantly that he didn't need to, you know? it feels incredibly natural, letting things happen at the pace of the story and not just because it brings drama or heightens a scene.
i thought liam's voice was so organic and strong and sweet because he's so distraught over zayn but he's liam so he wants to help. and he tries so hard - but at the same time i see zayn's
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omg i'm a HUGE fan of your writing! i'm pretty sure i made a pretty embarrassing gush over your 'le petit prince' story and so i flailed big time when i saw that you had commented
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oh wow, that's really sweet of you to say!! wow, you're so lovely thank you :)
i absolutely loved what you did with all the characteristics yeah, they were fab. ICK! I am ridiculously overwhelmingly pumped for louis story. this is exciting. whew. okay. i hope you're already like, done that, because i am very impatient when it comes to flawless verses :)
I am going to be incapable of leaving a worthy review. Here's the thing: This was fucking brilliant. Like, this is one of the most beautiful things I have read (including published fiction) in a long time. Your characters are flawed, so fucking flawed and cracked and sad and lovely and give me LIFE. How do you do it? How do you write the way I wish I could? You use these brilliant images that make me see exactly what you mean, give me the exact aching breaking feeling. I am in awe.
Niall, what a rock. He is everything. Liam makes me ache and I can literally feel and see him falling apart and I want to piece him back together. Harry, you smirky sad snake. Louis the fab writer. And God, Zayn. I hurt for and hate him. I want to scream STOP YOU SELFISH PRICK but I want to hug him to my chest and sing him a lullaby.
This is so perfect and sweet Jesus, I am hardcore in love with your writing. Huge, huge, huge fangirl. Love.
oh my god, better than published fiction? you're flattering me too much :)
and i think in writing it's important to have flaws and also redeeming qualities so i try to incorporate them in all my characters even if the boys are seemingly so flawless.
the liamandzayn dynamic is very subtle and quiet so there's a lot of emotions that go unspoken and unfelt between them but things always have to get worse before they get better?
i actually cracked up when i read 'harry you smirky sad snake' because it's so ACCURATE. but we'll see lots of him and louis in the next part. and since when is niall NOT an emotional rock for the five of them?
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After this bit the problem with london is that she’s gorgeous and darling and she’ll suck your cock until you stop paying her. then you start to see that when you look behind the right lighting, the good manners, it’s cold and filthy, but by then she’ll have left you penniless and…empty. I think I actually fell in love with you because you write everything I want to write and feel what I want to feel and I had to pause for a while and read over the whole thing again with new eyes because it was all so heart breaking and wonderful,
but thank you again for posting, am going to friend so I know when/what you're writing!
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and of course there will be more harry saying wise things like that!
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please...i - please be okay???? i'm so sorry that you cried i didn't mean to make anyone cry! but i'm glad you're so emotionally invested in it and thank you for reading even though it made you cry!
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i loved that you didn't feel - obliged? right word? - to introduce us to all the characters in turn. i loved that louis was talked about but liam never really met him (unless this moment:
liam sees sunrise and tanned, elfin hands lifting him into a warm, bright-colored car, his head pillowed by a stack of shakespeare leatherbounds and a musical voice prattering to a beatles song.
was real in case yes. yes. i think it was. i like to think louis would pick strange boys who aren't ready for the world, up at pubs and drive them home), but more importantly that he didn't need to, you know? it feels incredibly natural, letting things happen at the pace of the story and not just because it brings drama or heightens a scene.
i thought liam's voice was so organic and strong and sweet because he's so distraught over zayn but he's liam so he wants to help. and he tries so hard - but at the same time i see zayn's ( ... )
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i absolutely loved what you did with all the characteristics yeah, they were fab. ICK! I am ridiculously overwhelmingly pumped for louis story. this is exciting. whew. okay. i hope you're already like, done that, because i am very impatient when it comes to flawless verses :)
you're so lovely!! keep on writing darling!
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Niall, what a rock. He is everything. Liam makes me ache and I can literally feel and see him falling apart and I want to piece him back together. Harry, you smirky sad snake. Louis the fab writer. And God, Zayn. I hurt for and hate him. I want to scream STOP YOU SELFISH PRICK but I want to hug him to my chest and sing him a lullaby.
This is so perfect and sweet Jesus, I am hardcore in love with your writing. Huge, huge, huge fangirl. Love.
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and i think in writing it's important to have flaws and also redeeming qualities so i try to incorporate them in all my characters even if the boys are seemingly so flawless.
the liamandzayn dynamic is very subtle and quiet so there's a lot of emotions that go unspoken and unfelt between them but things always have to get worse before they get better?
i actually cracked up when i read 'harry you smirky sad snake' because it's so ACCURATE. but we'll see lots of him and louis in the next part. and since when is niall NOT an emotional rock for the five of them?
thank you for reading, sweetheart <3
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