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wildejoy

Glee fic: "Show Face" (2/3)

Jul 31, 2010 05:38

Title: Show Face (part 2 of 3)
Pairing: Jesse/Rachel
Rating: NC-17 (this chapter)
Word count: 3,316
Summary: This is the story of how Rachel manages to turn Jesse from the Phantom of the Opera into Raoul, and completely without intention. Jesse is dumbfounded.

From Sectionals to Journey (and beyond): this is Glee, from Jesse's point of view.

part one

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.glee, /jesse st. james, =nc-17, fanfiction, /rachel berry, +jesse/rachel

Comments 8

alabellavita July 31 2010, 17:45:12 UTC

Oh my god, I just found this story and let me tell you, I am completely in love with it. I love your characterization of both Rachel and Jesse so much I'm a little sad there's only one chapter left. I adore the tiny details you include, like the fact Rachel wraps gold star stickers on every day things like her tooth brush and Jesse being the only person to note Schue's inappropriate song choices for high school kids. I love how Rachel gets off to Maria and Jesse's megalomaniac enjoyment of her chanting his name. Ugh, it's so good and this chapter was ridiculously hot. Awesome job!

wildejoy July 31 2010, 18:00:44 UTC

Oh wow, thank you!♥ You're very kind. But I can promise you that even though there's only one more chapter of this, I'll write much more of them. I adore these two.

unseensorrows August 1 2010, 00:32:18 UTC

your writing is absolutely incredible!
i love your characterization!

wildejoy August 4 2010, 03:12:28 UTC

Thank you! =) (Sorry I took so long to respond.)

cut_thestring August 1 2010, 00:53:03 UTC

Yet another great chapter! I just love your characterisation, and, like alabellavita said, all those little details you include. :D You must write more of them after this fic, yes?

wildejoy August 1 2010, 00:59:02 UTC

Thank you! =) And believe me, I will.

huggle_me August 1 2010, 04:49:42 UTC

"When she finally notices him, he resists the urge to tell her that her ninety degree arabesque closer to eighty."
Third section, first paragraph, second sentence. You're missing a word.

"He settles a hand in the small of her back and runs the other through her hair, and she sighs into his mouth, arching her back."
Third section, fifth paragraph, seventh sentence (including the one in brackets, because it is part of it, so I'm counting it, but it's not a big deal anyways, 'cause I copied the sentence (and really, it only matters if you're one of those people who thinks that brackets don't really mean that it's part of the story, even though it is, although there are those people who use them to write side notes and/or author notes, that don't add to the story, but are more of a "oh, and by the way, I forgot to mention... before, and it'd be helpful to know" or the "haha, so I just thought of this while I was writing/typing, and I thought it was funny/interesting, and you have to read my thoughts, because I think it's important that ( ... )

anonymous December 13 2011, 16:04:23 UTC

OK WOW,WOW,WOW.

PLEASE POST THE LAST CHAPTER!!!

PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!