fic: "Show Face" (4/4)

[wildejoy]

There will be an epilogue to this, just so everyone knows! =)

Title: Show Face (part 4)
Pairing: Jesse/Rachel
Rating: PG (this chapter)
Word count: 3,795
Summary: This is the story of how Rachel manages to turn Jesse from the Phantom of the Opera into Raoul, and completely without intention. Jesse is dumbfounded.

From Sectionals to Journey (and beyond):

Comments

superb writing

[maybabe80]

wow just wow...
this is one if not the best jesse/rachel fanfic i've read!
i actually just opened a livejournal account so i could leave a review. i just could not not compliment you about how amazing this fic is.
the characterizations is just spot on, nice pacing and not to mention very well written.

i love how you manage to show the reasons behind jesse's actions in a logical way. as reader you actually get to understand why he does it all, get to see jesse grow up a bit and understand why rachel forgives him in the end (or gives him that olive branch).

there's so much in this story i like and love and too many thought running around in my head right now that i just can't express them all clearly. i'll probably reread this story of yours many many times and maybe after all the rereading i'll be able to convey my thoughts better and i promise i'll leave a review for each chapter you've written.

are you planning a sequel or maybe an epilogue?

thanks for sharing this wonderful fic:)

Re: superb writing

[wildejoy]

asdfghjkl; Oh goodness.♥ Thank you! I am indeed planning an epilogue, but god only knows how long it may be before that's done - I seem to be experiencing a particularly nasty bout of writer's block. >< But I'll do my best - and thank you for all the kind words!

[kimbo_smarties]

I just found this fic and OH MY GOD. I love this more than words can describe. Your characterization is brilliant, and I LOVE the little Broadway references you thrown in ("sweet Salonga" made me grin like a maniac).

I'm now going to read your other fics and flail like a fangirl over them too. :)

[wildejoy]

♥Thank you! You're too sweet. I'm working on the epilogue to this fic, but I have been for some time... I'm finding it hard to wrap up. But hopefully sometime this month? Haha.

Thanks again for your kind words!