The Lonely Road 1/?

[wildern_blue]

Title: The Lonely Road 1/?

Author: Wildern Blue

Pairing: House/Wilson

Warnings: mentions of attempted suicide, depression and *minor* charcter death

Rating: R

Summary: After a death in the family, Wilson remembers. House digs. And everything comes to a head.

Disclaimer: If I owned the show, d'you think this fic would be necessary?

Comments

[phobiaofshae]

Okay so I'm the worst person in the world for posting this comment this late. ANYWAY. I really like this. I didn't really see anything majorly wrong with it, just a few random spelling errors. I'll read back through it and give you a list or something?

[wildern_blue]

That's alright, ma'am. I was actually thinking about changing the last line in the whole thing, saying instead of how Wilson was going to tell his father died to how Wilson was going to tell House that his father was dying. I actually did research on Jewish funerary customs and it's...a little too complicated to say the least. So, I'm thinking - and I'm not sure if you've read the notes I have on this story - if not I'll post the link - that I could change the ending. Not the epilogue. Just, instead of making in just as Wilson reflecting on what's happened, also write the imagery of the part of a Jewish funeral that Wilson would take part of.

I don't know if Wilson's family is Reform or Orthodox. I'll probably make them Reform as many of the rituals involved in the before and after process of death aren't as strict.

[wildern_blue]

Here's the link:

http://wildern-blue.livejournal.com/7065.html#cutid1