[fic] Something to Hold Onto, Chapter 7: Under Your Skin Feels Like Home

[wildgoosery]

Title: Something to Hold Onto [7/13]
Word count: 7,300
Pairing: Jet/Zuko
Rating: A very hard R for language, violence and sexual content
Summary: Since the day the walls of Ba Sing Se fell, the Freedom Fighters have struggled to protect what remains of the city and its people. Jet and his second command, a mysterious boy named Li, have spent the

Comments

[ali_wildgoose]

I am still so ridiculously in love with that drawing you did OMFG ;_______;

ETA: WELL I GUESS THIS WAS BOUND TO HAPPEN <3

[trefallen]

DAKLJFLSADKJLSADKJFASDA. BRB WITH A COHERENT COMMENT. I NEED TO GO THROUGH THOSE PICTURES AGAIN.

[ali_wildgoose]

<3333333333333

[ali_wildgoose]

I make no promises.

But seriously...YOU KNOW ME.

[trefallen]

SCREAM SCREAM SCREEEEEEEEEEEEEEAM.

first, MAY I SAY THAT THE PICTURE WITH IROH IS PRECIOUS. his face is so 8D

Omfg. I literally came home from school and sat down on the computer to see if you've updated AND YOU DID. ALDKFJ. I LOOKED AT THE TITLE AND THOUGHT DIRTY THOUGHTS. ..Guh. Okay, real comment now :) You deserve it after all those keyboard smashing comments I've left in the past.

Your Jet is gorgeous. God, he is everything I look for in a Jetko fic. He isn't the crazy charisma guy anymore ;__; Most writers write the part where he finds out about Zuko and is angry for weeks on end, and that's something that makes me drop the story all together. I'm so happy he got over it! (RIDICULOUSLY happy, I'm grinning like a complete idiot :D)

ZUKO ZUKO ZUKO I want to mash his cheeks and drink the juice D: D: Ugh, he is too precious ;__; I am definitely not a fan of a blushing and school-girl Zuko after sexytimes, but you made it adorable and cute and in character. I can honestly say that your characterizations

[trefallen]

Oh, whoops. Was thinking of a different picture :D

Anyway, you're welcome! I like your style, and I love Jin's arms in that picture, for some reason. She looks so chubby and cute :Q__

[trefallen]

...I MEANT, WAS THINKING OF A DIFFERENT PICTURE WHEN I REPLIED WITH THAT DELETED COMMENT. BUT I DID SAY THAT THE PICTURE WITH IROH AND JIN IS PRECIOUS. BECAUSE. UH. OKAY.

crap, sorry :D

[m_a_foxfire]

Eeeee update update update! *has been circling this journal like a vulture all day eeeeeee update*

Oh Zuko you are just perpetually conflicted these days.

*huffpuff* I don't know if Jet's doing that sexy-sexy stud thing on purpose but it is good funtimes either way. You just made a guy drinking soup into the hottest thing I've read today how is that even possible okay hottest thing read today sure has some competition now yes it does kyaaaa

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zffff brain melt

In more literary terms and less incoherent bibbling ones, you do tension hella well. Zuko's guilty sort of unease makes for a delicious contrast with the ongoing sexual attraction and uh squishy squishy squishy ♥

Fluffy made-the-hell-up pillow talk scenes are always awesome. Extra love for still having some worry in there, and extra extra love for them Working Through Things.

[ali_wildgoose]

HAH. You know....I feel like Jet is completely aware of the fact that he's an attractive guy, and has the ability to use his charm to move through the world as he wishes to, but I'll bet that he underestimates how much his mere EXISTING drives Zuko crazy sometimes. *laughs* Awwww, teenaged hormones.... <3

I'm really glad you enjoyed the tension in this chapter -- it's certainly a big part of what I was going for, given all the crazy nonsense that's going on in all these character's lives ^_^;

Thank you so much for taking the time to comment! I'm just sorry I'm so behind on my replies!