[fic] Something to Hold Onto, Chapter 11: Cinematic, Razor Sharp

[wildgoosery]

Title: Something to Hold Onto [11/13]
Word count: 4,800
Pairing: Jet/Zuko
Rating: A very hard R for language, violence and sexual content
Summary: Since the day the walls of Ba Sing Se fell, the Freedom Fighters have struggled to protect what remains of the city and its people. Jet and his second command, a mysterious boy named Li, have spent the

Comments

[ali_wildgoose]

I suppose they did, in fact, get told. ;3

Hooray, I'm really glad you enjoyed it! MORE SOON, I SWEAR <3 <3 <3

[meredyd]

OH, PING.

Your fight scenes are so great, especially when you're describing firebending. This chapter was like finally taking a nice big breath after holding it for a long time!

I'M SO PROUD OF THEM ALLLLL

[ali_wildgoose]

ping *_______*

I'm just SO GLAD to be moving again. I HOPE IT CONTINUES TO ENTERTAIN, BB <3

[ali_wildgoose]

You're very kind to say so, thank you! And as always, it cheers the hell out of me when the dynamic between Jet and Zuko rings true for someone -- I really want for their relationship to be a believable one, however extreme the circumstances.

<3!!

[suzukiblu]

Yay, the story LIVES! :D And lives with a bonus chapter, ooo la la! <3 I'm so pleased you had the time to get back to it again, I missed it while it was gone.

Also, Commander Jet. I. I do believe you have just instilled an unhealthy love for that title in me. *prrrr* (look at you, Jet, you have a haircut AND a real job, you are practically going NATIVE!)

[ali_wildgoose]

Yeah, man, I'll tell ya -- there was a month or two when I genuinely didn't have time to work on it, but after that it's just that things went AGONIZINGLY SLOW. So thank you for being patient with me! <3

Also LOL FOREVER at the mental image of salaryman Jet you have just instilled in me XD

[suzukiblu]

oh and now I want to write salarayman!Jet, that is REALLY TEMPTING >>

[ali_wildgoose]

DOOO EEET <3

[m_a_foxfire]

Whoa, victory!

And two chapters to go - that's a lotta delicious epilogue!

[ali_wildgoose]

Haha yeah, THERE IS SOME NONSENSE LEFT TO RESOLVE, that's for sure! <3