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Fic: Inertia - Part 16 [The Closer]

Feb 27, 2011 14:41

Title: Inertia - Part 16 [The Closer]
Rating: PG - 13
Ship: Brenda/Sharon
Disclaimer: Not mine; never were! No copyright infringement intended.

Summary: With Fritz gone, and her relationship with Sharon growing more serious, Brenda begins to wonder about just how close she's willing to get to the other woman. Sharon, it seems, has ( Read more... )

sharon raydor, the closer, brenda leigh johnson, brenda/sharon, fan fic

Comments 23

val_120 February 27 2011, 22:05:17 UTC

Yesss, I was waiting for your update. *gg*

And oh god...Sharon Q_Q - great chapter as always! Can't wait for the next one!

madampresident February 28 2011, 01:57:09 UTC

Oh no! Sharon! And not just because I was planning on shooting her in an upcoming chapter! Oh no! Brilliant as usual, this part was so heart wrenching when Brenda realized she didn't know much about her, that was sad.

Can't wait for more!

wildwildwood February 28 2011, 07:16:35 UTC

Thanks - the form part was one of my favorite to write... They kept not talking and eventually it became too late to talk :(

moodweather February 28 2011, 02:26:26 UTC

Wow. Hats off to you, queen of angst. I don't know if this is the right way to describe it, but that felt really honest. Beautifully written and really gave you a sense of the competing emotions brenda has to deal with. Will be interesting to see what happens when Laura (and presumably Willie Rae?) turns up. Lookig forward to the next instalment!

wildwildwood February 28 2011, 07:17:07 UTC

I will gladly accept honest as it's a MAJOR complement!

lindy999 February 28 2011, 03:02:36 UTC

No, no, no, no....not Sharon. Please make her better fast :(

Let Mama Johnson come and take care of everyone and they all live happily ever after.

At least let Brenda be there when Sharon wakes up, and, oh yeah, she needs to be holding Sharon's hand at the time :)

wildwildwood February 28 2011, 07:17:34 UTC

Wake up fast; Brenda holding her hand... Let's see what I can do :D

obsessive_a101 February 28 2011, 03:09:02 UTC

I've JUST been catching up (AND OHMYGOSH! SO MANY AMAZING STORIES ALREADY!), but *gasp* This certainly has me on the edge of my seat. Also, I am stunned and amazed at how well you managed to make Brenda's perception of the experience and what's happening so real. I literally felt her sense of shock and displacement in the event, and I'm DEFINITELY looking forward to the next part. (In fact, I am very ANXIOUSLY doing so. LOL!)

wildwildwood February 28 2011, 07:18:13 UTC

Wow - such lovely complements... Thank you! Glad you're enjoying it so far!