Fic: Inertia - Part 17 [The Closer]

[wildwildwood]

Title: Inertia - Part 17 [The Closer]
Rating: PG - 13
Ship: Brenda/Sharon
Disclaimer: Not mine; never were! No copyright infringement intended.

Summary: With Fritz gone, and her relationship with Sharon growing more serious, Brenda begins to wonder about just how close she's willing to get to the other woman.  Sharon, it seems,

Comments

[ithnkivbrokenit]

Well I read about 9 chapters then rl got in the way. Imagine my surprise last night when I discovered 8 and a half more!! You are responsible for the dark circles under my eyes. Was too late to comment yday but just had to this morning as I am in love with you fic. Well specifically your Sharon. You bring out depth and caution in her and I think it's absolutely spot on. Fast becoming an absolute fave.
I'm usually a bit of a lurker but I'm coming out of hiding to say please don't end this fic, I'm sure someone as talented as you can focus on schoolwork during daytime hours and that would leave your nights free to focus on this, my very guilty pleasure.
Take care

[wildwildwood]

1st - LOVE your name! Made me laugh so hard I had to re-read your comment 'cause I was too busy LoLing!
2nd - So glad you de-lurked to let me know you're enjoying this fic! I've got to end this fic, but I'm pretty sure they'll be others... After a string of R&I fics I was pretty sure I'd give up fic, but it kinda pulls you in... :D But your kind words are VERY much appreciated!

[moodweather]

So many great moments in this chapter. I love Willie Rae trying to be all 'West Coast' about seeing Fritz whilst being in the midst of an entirely separate family crisis, and then his conversation with Brenda...oh, and 'her boys'... look I could just go on. I do wonder how long Brenda can keep up the pretense of her relationship while carrying on a bedside vigil... will just have to wait until the next chapter!

[wildwildwood]

I'm glad Willie Rae's fitting it - she's so great, but Brenda's never given her mother much credit before - hopefully this'll help :) Also that the conversation with Fritz wasn't too 'out there' (and by out there I mean totally out of the blue and unbelievable)! I just think he'd care and want her to be happy, he's Fritz after all! :D

[frenhu]

Oh, damn, you did it again and wrote a brilliant chapter! I can't praise you enough, so I will just go with the 'you better write more and soon' and make everything right again between them ;)

[wildwildwood]

::blushes:: Thanks :)

[stinker_1]

I feel as if these two are always being shot at. I hope they figure it out when Sharon wakes up. Good story.

[wildwildwood]

Well, with all due respect - I shot my Sharon first :D And I mean, she's just so... shootable! Maybe it's fictional karma for all the airlocking Laura Roslin did?

[major_roon]

Y'know, I stick to my initial statement - it's not really melodramatic! You could've had Brenda confess her undying love for Sharon right there on the street in front of everybody. You could've had Laura suddenly turning on Brenda, saying it was all her fault and that she couldn't see her mother etc etc etc, so, see? Not really melodramatic.

Your Willie Rae was fantastic, you've got her voice down beautifully. Seems like Brenda's got her mind made up once and for all but that doesn't necessarily mean Sharon has as well. Ugh, I'm so addicted to this fic and I can barely wait for another chapter!!!

[wildwildwood]

LoL - Brenda's confession of undying love the likes the world has never known as she gazed into Sharon's sparkling emerald eyes as she felt the life drain from her dying lover's body is actually in the director's cut of this fic - Awk...ward!

I'm glad Willie Rae's fitting in, she's really hard to write in some ways because she's such a basic/simple character on screen... :D Thanks for the kind words... Any chance YOU'LL update soon?! PLEEEEEEZE?