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Fic: Inertia - Part 19 [The Closer]

Mar 07, 2011 01:08

Title: Inertia - Part 19 [The Closer]
Rating: T
Ship: Brenda/Sharon
Disclaimer: Not mine; never were! No copyright infringement intended.

Summary: With Fritz gone, and her relationship with Sharon growing more serious, Brenda begins to wonder about just how close she's willing to get to the other woman. Sharon, it seems, ( Read more... )

sharon raydor, the closer, brenda leigh johnson, brenda/sharon, fan fic

Comments 22

swtlilsophie March 7 2011, 16:36:43 UTC

WAKE UP SHARONNN.

Awesome update! I'm loving all the Brenda/Sharon's family interaction.

wildwildwood March 8 2011, 17:31:16 UTC

Thanks - and I think it's time for Sharon to wake up too!

korenap March 7 2011, 17:14:05 UTC

Nice update

caity_love March 7 2011, 17:25:57 UTC

Good Heavens, BRENDA FIGURED IT OUT! yayyy! Now Sharon needs to wake up.
I particurally enjoyed how Will and Flynn reacted. It was realistic and nicely done.

wildwildwood March 8 2011, 17:34:03 UTC

Awww - thanks! Will's reaction was pretty simple to deal with (pretty much a meh); but Flynn had to be realistic and representative of all the guys so it was a little trickier - so glad it was believable!

moodweather March 7 2011, 20:08:06 UTC

Great update. Now I'm just waiting for Sharon to wake up, decide it's all too hard and head off to a beach somewhere, leaving Brenda to deal with the fall out. (that was a bad joke and not a suggestion)

I like that Pope really doesn't seem to care either way about whether Brenda is shacking up with Raydor and love that Flynn is brazen enough to ask to watch. Totally in character! Oh and yay you bringing back the bet and Buzz the romantic! Adding it to fic canon along with Sharon's baking skills and peanut butter cups + S/B = adult sexy-times :D

wildwildwood March 8 2011, 17:36:18 UTC

You know, it's not a bad idea... Hmmm... I'll have to re-work the ending, but that could work! :D

J/K - I'm glad Will & Flynn's reactions were realistic! As for the Buzz, the poor guy just sits in the back most times, I felt like he needed a shout-out :D

madampresident March 7 2011, 22:21:16 UTC

I loved everything but especially the last thing with Willie Rae asking if she'd ever get back together with Fritz. When I broke up with the guy I was dating my freshman year my grandmother kept asking if I'd ever get back with him until I wanted to be like "NO JUST DROP IT OKAY?!"

Well done, darling!

wildwildwood March 8 2011, 17:38:25 UTC

Oooh - I get it, trust me, my family's the same way! I'm glad it didn't come across as too snippy of Willie Rae - it really is just how some family members think! :D