Comments | willdew: Fic: Modern Girl vs. Paradigm || Fandom: Inuyasha

willdew

Fic: Modern Girl vs. Paradigm || Fandom: Inuyasha

Jun 02, 2007 14:14

Fandom: Inuyasha
Pairings: Sess x Rin, Kag x Inu
Rating: PG-13
Title: Modern Girl vs. Paradigm
Summary: Kagome discovers that her 20th century ways of thinking are woefully anachronistic in feudal-era Japan. Un-beta'd, second draft.

( Some truths are better felt than said. )

sesshoumaru, fanfiction, rin, inuyasha

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Yes plz willdew June 3 2007, 00:33:34 UTC

I would appreciate it! I am trying to improve after not writing fic for a while.

I'm doing my best to develop a tough skin, but some people feel more comfortable giving concrit privately and I respect that. If you want to email it to me go for it at oddsandbodkins at gmail.com! (Just replace the "at" with the "@" symbol, I'm trying to avoid robots and spiders, is all.) Or you can just post it in this thread.

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anonymous June 3 2007, 06:03:19 UTC

wow. i like it!! well written too!

willdew June 3 2007, 06:44:06 UTC

Thanks! I'm glad you liked it. :D

peacewish June 3 2007, 13:31:17 UTC

ingratiatingly sycophantic toad is perhaps THE best description of Jaken I have read in fanfic. Ever.

*SQUEES* willdew June 3 2007, 16:30:18 UTC

If you're the same peacewish who wrote all those really great, really loooong CCS fics on fanfiction.net then wow, I'm pretty lucky to be getting praise from you!

Not that I'm not flattered to get praise anyhow, but!! :D Yay. Thanks!

Re: *SQUEES* peacewish June 3 2007, 19:31:57 UTC

Aw, always nice to meet a fan, especially outside the CCS fandom. I look forward to reading more Inufic from you in the future.

*squees more* willdew June 3 2007, 20:11:35 UTC

If it's okay, I'd like to friend you. Yay.

shaid1979 June 3 2007, 17:07:55 UTC

That was very good. I liked the feel of the first part. The cut to Rin's wedding day was a bit confusing to me, but perhaps I missed something? It felt abrupt. But then, it is just bit of a drabble. :-)

Great job. And I agree on the description of Jaken. Heh, perfect!

willdew June 3 2007, 17:43:20 UTC

Yeah, it was a bit abrupt. Mostly I wanted to show that Kagome might be on to something on one hand, but could completely not understand traditional ways of thinking on the other. And a quick flash forward seemed like the best way to do that, but maybe showing how she was wrong over time might have worked, too. *Scratches chin.* I'll think about it for next time.

I'm glad people like what I did with poor Jaken. The effeminate toad gets the short stick in life. Poor grumpy.

thebes_rain September 10 2007, 20:33:35 UTC

This was great. You did a good job at portraying two different women of two completely different era. Keep up the good work! I love introspective pieces like this!