A Matter of Timing - For bluestraggler

Dec 19, 2008 09:40

Title: A Matter of Timing
Author: morphaileffect
Recipient: bluestraggler
Rating: G, PG at best
Other Characters/Pairings: Yanagi/Niou
Disclaimer: Konomi Takeshi owns all, except for the clothes.
Warnings: Not much.
Summary: Between these two, timing is all that dictates who gets to
make the first move.
Notes: This is my first time writing Yanagi/Niou and I'm... not all ( Read more... )

round 1, niou masaharu

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bluestraggler December 20 2008, 00:01:38 UTC
Ahhh that was lovely! Thank you! I really appreciate that you chose to write something that was challenging/not intuitive to you. I think you pulled it off great :) Yanagi's introspection pretty much put into exact words why I was initially intrigued by this pairing (I didn't quite know it until I read this fic). Also the idea of Yanagi trying to get Niou to steal for him is hilarious. It would make perfect sense, since Yanagi must be very good with his money XDDD And I loved the ending, it was perfect especially with Yanagi analyzing and putting a name/conclusion to everything, makes the outcome particularly satisfying X) Thank you again!

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mlina December 21 2008, 21:57:30 UTC
This was ridiculously sexy. :) The look on Niou's face. Utterly priceless. Yanagi, so sneaky~

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