Umm.. if this is the right thing to do.._cryinginside_January 20 2005, 04:04:41 UTC
Willow had but hadn't noticed the look on Tara's face. She saw the shock, yes. And the hurt. But some part of Willow's brain didn't actually compute it as what she saw. 'What? There's nothing wrong..we were just-' "W-willow.. I'm sorry.. I didn't mean-" But Willow was too late. "No, Tara! Wait! Please!!!"
"What?" Amy asked, an almost evil grin came to her face. Her intention had been to cause friction between the two. And it had worked. Brilliantly. "So..where's that prime A negative you were gonna give me?" Vampire Willow moved in for the kill...which was not what Amy had planned.
Re: Umm.. if this is the right thing to do..foxfire_hippieJanuary 20 2005, 04:35:10 UTC
It can work, just try to tie into the original story. =) And, if you want, you can start a new entry and post some of your work that I noticed you had posted in another community =)
Re: Umm.. if this is the right thing to do..foxfire_hippieJanuary 20 2005, 04:55:35 UTC
oh I get you. Some people do it that way, but when the stories all tie together, it seems to make more sense. If you didn't intend for that part to tie into the story would you mind deleting the comment? Just so it doesn't get confusing =)
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But some part of Willow's brain didn't actually compute it as what she saw. 'What? There's nothing wrong..we were just-'
"W-willow.. I'm sorry.. I didn't mean-"
But Willow was too late.
"No, Tara! Wait! Please!!!"
"What?" Amy asked, an almost evil grin came to her face.
Her intention had been to cause friction between the two.
And it had worked. Brilliantly.
"So..where's that prime A negative you were gonna give me?"
Vampire Willow moved in for the kill...which was not what Amy had planned.
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Okay, had it wrong.
Woops.
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P.S. I look forward to all of your stuff!!!
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