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Nov 09, 2007 22:20

There is no where I could follow, where your words would have been but that they are not. I think, you are sparse in this white of space or dissolved in this black spill of ink. I think, I long for the sound of your thoughts, of how they are recreated in form, that I may move my skin over it and feel it seep into my pores, that I may sigh at the ( Read more... )

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chingga November 9 2007, 15:32:18 UTC
I can almost feel your longing. Sigh. You make me weep.

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willower November 14 2007, 14:07:55 UTC
It's made me sigh, without retracing.

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With much love my favorite author wicapis November 9 2007, 16:55:54 UTC
I think, I may not be intended to be where you are in some phases. But that I do ask from the wind- trusting its clairvoyance- that every now and again, all slows and subsides and we become visible.

As I've said many many times over, I never tire reading you, Sharon. The longing and pain is felt from this end. Just stupendous writing.

My next goal in life is to attempt to write like you. I think I said that some four years ago. No luck yet. LOL

Santha

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Re: With much love my favorite author willower November 14 2007, 13:58:34 UTC
You already write just as you would. I think there is always something at which are so effortlessly conjured-- for instance, the images that you weave when you, Santha, are writing. I did smile, however, that you should choose to include in your comment, the one with the wind's clairvoyance. I'm reminded as of the moment of responding.

There may be the longing, yes. But pain is.. I'm not certain. There is, however, only 'tender to touch', which is only me, of course. I realise it reaches across differently. Thank you always for reading.

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musidora November 10 2007, 08:35:35 UTC
you have perfectly captured what i have wanted to write about for so long...

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willower November 14 2007, 13:49:35 UTC
I thought to myself how that was saying it for me too. I mean yes, I wrote it but I really needed it for myself to take shape.

Hey, you know I went to your side of the world on November 1st (that time I sent you a message also) just to procure that dark chocolat from ecuador at the grocer. I like it. Now I'm also wanting to try the one with the orange? I'm not sure. I only know trinidad lemons, I suppose. Haha. The lady behind the counter said, the bittersweet dark one was better selling.

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