Bar Review Haiku

[willyd_5]

Sit in Sun and Look
Commercial Paper No Fun
See Volcano Cry.

Gave Up Pizza Job
Used to Smoke Grass All Day, Laugh
Commercial Paper.

Toilet Paper Stuck
Commercial Paper Not Knocked
Beach Restroom Memoirs

Comments

[savingjon]

I got one for you. 17 syllables, right?

Sat near oak
Leaf whispered in wind
Will cheated in Kick Distance contest

[_montecore_]

jon jon
it has to be
5
7
5
if i am not mistaken.

poetry, like all art, must follow the rules
and i, like all (ex)law students, must point out mistakes of others.

[harriettheelf]

not mistaken - and i really must direct everyone to _montecore_'s page because anyone who can integrate chemerinsky into a dirty haiku gets serious props.

[savingjon]

Haiku, take 2.

Leaf whispered in wind
Will cheated in Kick Distance
Murphy a tool box

[_montecore_]

coffee jazzy hands
paris hilton video
leaf told me suh suhks