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Apr 24, 2009 12:44

Man, you guys are so lucky that my job sucks today ( Read more... )

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missing_lynk April 24 2009, 21:02:58 UTC
Oh gosh. I don't know if I could get over my own awkwardness enough to write a good kiss scene! But I've gotten SUCH a thrill from writing these two pieces, that I'm more than happy to work on more. Thanks so much for the feedback. I was seriously so proud of this. The idea of a migraine has been written for a while, just as a plain fiction piece (the first 3 paragraphs, essentially) but then I decided to apply it to Wilson and took it from there.

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missing_lynk April 25 2009, 00:45:19 UTC
Thank you so much! I hope I'll be inspired even more in the near future.

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bkwmkiwi April 25 2009, 08:03:06 UTC
Wow, you're really churning them out. Please do not stop. (I agree with crimson_rx on the kiss idea.)

My favourite line in the whole thing (although, ok, it wasn't that long) was Cuddy saying "Don't be ridiculous." That was such an in character thing for her to say, times four hundred and seventy. I love how she was so matter-of-fact about it all as well, like, sympathetic, but at the same time, making sure he didn't overplay it. (But I also think you have Wilson wonderfully in character.)

AND I love how it's all so innocent, but has little...innuendos everywhere. So cute XD

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missing_lynk April 26 2009, 16:38:58 UTC
Awww thanks. I know I sound like a broken record, but I have gotten such a thrill out of writing these two pieces. Let's hope my job sucks even more in the coming weeks - more time to write! ;)

Thanks - I knew if Cuddy went too soft, it wouldn't be her.

Hopefully I can master a Wuddy kiss. I'm terrified it would be SO awkward. I'm trying to imagine a setting where it would seem... plausible. We shall see :)

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