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wiltedrose98

On Heaven Considered as What Will Cover Us Until The Morning Light

Aug 02, 2004 15:13

In the village churchyard she lies ( Read more... )

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crazygirl2319 August 2 2004, 22:34:18 UTC

WOW!!!! Rachel!!!! those are REALLY GOOD!!!!! Geepers!! i wish i could write like that!!!!!
love-
monica

delerious_pyro August 2 2004, 22:42:07 UTC

i wish i could to... blah... i also wish i could also understand what youre talking about girls are so deep people

Yucky Boys! wiltedrose98 August 2 2004, 23:02:05 UTC

Stupid boys dont know anything about poems. Hehehe. But i will explain!

The first one was about a girl that had "the perfect live" in the begining of the poem, then as it goes on it explains how on the inside she really is a shallow person that itsnt that "perfect" on the inside.

Then the second one is about night time and all the sounds a rythums i here late at night, i accholy rote the second one this morning at like 3:00 am.

Re: Yucky Boys! delerious_pyro August 3 2004, 12:54:04 UTC

i understood the second one just not the first one im not that stupid

Re: Yucky Boys! wiltedrose98 August 3 2004, 16:39:07 UTC

Key word: "that"
Your not THAT stupid!
Hehehe, j/k. youra cool cat. its all good in da hood