Comments | wilwarin1: FIC: Stargazing (1/1)

wilwarin1

FIC: Stargazing (1/1)

Dec 06, 2007 17:58

Rating: G
Spoiler Warnings: None

Word count: 675

Character(s): Wee!Dean, Wee!Sam, John

Type of story: Pre-series

Disclaimers: I’m just borrowing the characters of Supernatural. Eventually I will give them back, scarred, but otherwise okay.

Summary: “Teach me about the stars, Dad.”

Prompt: Marshmallows, leaves, constellations

Author's Notes: Written for ( Read more... )

spn thursday nights, fanfiction, supernatural, pre-series

Comments 13

embroiderama December 6 2007, 17:40:44 UTC

Aw, man, that's beautiful.

wilwarin1 December 6 2007, 18:09:39 UTC

Thanks ever so much!! I'm glad you liked it!

exposed1 December 6 2007, 17:56:56 UTC

Beautiful moment between John and his boys. You packed so much emotion in this. I loved the details about how John views Dean and Sam. How they are different and yet hold so much of Mary in them. Loved that. What I loved even more was John's description of Sam and the newborn colt. It fits so well and makes me just visualize Sam in all his long limbed glory.

I caught one small spelling mistake, With a sign John once again looks up at the night sky. Sign should be sigh.

You did a really wonderful job with this prompt and it was a joy to read John having such a nice 'normal' moment with his kids. You killed me with that line about the brightest star being Mary. *sniffles*

wilwarin1 December 6 2007, 18:11:01 UTC

The typo has been changed. Thanks for letting me know. I wrote this one in kind of a hurry.

I'm really pleased that you like it that much!! Thanks!

skybound2 December 6 2007, 19:05:40 UTC

Oh, lovely :-) I especially like this line: Sammy on the other hand is all long arms and legs that have yet to discover their role in life. It's jsut such an apt description of him. Awesome job.

wilwarin1 December 8 2007, 10:16:59 UTC

Thanks!! I figured Sam at that age would be much the same as my brother when he was growing. LOL!

stars91 December 6 2007, 20:14:09 UTC

Just perfect! You took my prompts and ran with them! I absolutely adore this, its exactly what I was looking for! I love to read those normal moments that the three had, the times that weren't all hunting and killing and the family business and you captured that here perfectly! THANK YOU!

wilwarin1 December 8 2007, 10:18:03 UTC

You're welcome!! Good to hear you're happy with it! That makes me happy too. Thanks so much!

starrylizard December 6 2007, 21:06:56 UTC

Lovely! :)

wilwarin1 December 8 2007, 10:18:25 UTC

Thanks!