Impossible question #847

Jun 27, 2012 17:26

So for all the fanfic writers and/or Once Upon A Time fans out there...



Is there ANY particular way you can have a thirty-something year old man tell his twenty-eight year old daughter (that he has recently just discovered she was related to him, via a time freezing curse being broken) that she has really good upper body strength and too well developed arm muscles NOT to have done some weight training/body building... WITHOUT making him sound creepy?

I mean... I just... right now it's coming off as "So, yeah, I've been checking you out". NOT really the way I want this scene to go, you know?

fanfic, once upon a time

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