That...may have been my flailing comment on tumblr *hides* I just can't put into words how much I really, really like your fic.
And it's less abusive in that where 50 Shades makes your stomach turn, want to pull out a pen and correct the flow of sentence structure as well as scream at the repetition of words (etc) yours is captivating and enthralling. As well as being incredibly eloquent and emotionally driven with such passion that people (myself and others I talk to who've read) hold their breath at certain moments because they're mind is so taken that they forget to breathe.
And I'm done flailing now so I'm just going to step...over there...and hide.
Hee, I managed to "apropriate" a free version of the 50s trilogy and I still felt like I lost money. I seriously can't believe that it made someone money, let alone a lot of money. And that even famous people are admitting to reading it.
No, no, no... no hiding. Talking, feedbacking, flailing, THAT's what I like. :)
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And it's less abusive in that where 50 Shades makes your stomach turn, want to pull out a pen and correct the flow of sentence structure as well as scream at the repetition of words (etc) yours is captivating and enthralling. As well as being incredibly eloquent and emotionally driven with such passion that people (myself and others I talk to who've read) hold their breath at certain moments because they're mind is so taken that they forget to breathe.
And I'm done flailing now so I'm just going to step...over there...and hide.
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I think you found words enough.
Hee, I managed to "apropriate" a free version of the 50s trilogy and I still felt like I lost money. I seriously can't believe that it made someone money, let alone a lot of money. And that even famous people are admitting to reading it.
No, no, no... no hiding. Talking, feedbacking, flailing, THAT's what I like. :)
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