just finished the chapters and posted the review on FF.net... I won't lie, I wasn't as happy with it as I have been with every other chapter of Aferwards...
This one was a woolybooger. There was no way I could think of to write the tag and keep up with the plot twists I've already got going and that don't get resolved until the Retribution tags. Way too much was going to have to happen in this one, and the only way to do it was to basically put what would have been a long series of flashbacks into the story itself and let it play out side by side with what happened onscreen. With so much onscreen stuff having to be resolved and a lot of the plot bunny stuff having to get connected together, this one episode was the one where I could put in the most explanations of certain events so that when the reader finds out about them, it doesn't come out of the blue
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