{exo} if on a shanghai afternoon two writers // laykristao, AU

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Title: if on a shanghai afternoon two writers
Rating: PG
Pairing: Yixing/Kris, platonic(?) Yixing/Kris/Tao
Word count: 8k
Summary: As China's most popular and most charming young novelist, Zhang Yixing is living the life of his dreams. That is, until his editor and longtime best friend Kris Wu is assigned to Huang Zitao, EXO Entertainment's newest

Comments

[shouxian]

Oh and btw, as a Chinese person I think I liked it very much that you used all these Chinese references and Chinese words.
Like for me when I talk, I don't exactly translate qing cai and guai because... I don't really know how to translate it. Lol.
(Green vegetables and obedient? I danna LOL)

And it was a really nice story ;v; as;dlfjalf

[shouxian]

Oh, and you're Shanghainese, right?
I'm assuming so anyway... Since you know so much about Shanghainese stuff lul

[bani_chan]

There are so many little things that are perfect about this fic???
Your style of writing, the flow of your words, the relationships and interactions between everyone, the similies, the chinese .. It all makes this fic feel so much more... real?
It wasn't just your fic that was perfect, even the A/N was amazing, I think I cried a little when I laughed at 逃!桃..
Awww jeez I've run out of words to describe how perfect this fic was (the feelings, the images and the thoughts your words brought to mind etc) so here, take my heart instead: ♡

[pseudo_shigure]

I read it again, for the third or fourth time maybe, and still love it :)
It'd be great if you can write another fic in this AU, especially what happens after, and OMG, YES YES YES FOR JONGDAE

[nestababe]

REALLLY GOOD!!! kerhfjsd