01. Scorching and vengeful. This is perfect. At first I was like, title :-? but then I am like, la Boca del Cielo, yes. :D
02. The light sparking on his glasses! Too bright to look at him! It's the perfect feel of white hot summer, so familiar, especially movie-ized, like everything is solarized.
03. Diego was bad at stillness. omg.
04. I love how Gael sunscreening his back is so - opposite of cliche. I don't know how to express this better. It's just that, everything that goes along with the thought of someone sunscreening someone else's back - this isn't it. And I love that so much. Fingers digging into the edge of his shoulder blade! The scientific sound of it, the protrusion of calcium. Oh you.
05. Diego wanted to say, you're smoking your fifth cigarette of the day and I'm being baked to death and coated in sunscreen and we're shooting a goddamned movie, that's what we're doing. I love this sentence and I can't explain why but I do.
06. He thought, your problem is that you aren't
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and, darling, ilu a lot. i don't think this one is a striking as the first, but i think the next one might be? i'm an ideas person, mostly, as in i can't really write well without at least one clear perfect moment that i have to write out. :-? and this one was more forced than the previous.
yeah, i think the whole sunscreening thing might have been my unconscious trying not so subtly to insert UST, but i was thinking about the physicality of it all, of the summer and the sun and the strange suddeness of being there and alive and young. i have an obsession with the juxtaposition of science and romanticism. i don't know.
i think he does live furiously, maybe. there's something urgent about him in his pictures, in the interviews, something that pushes and jumps out at me. or i might just be kind of obsessed ahhhh.
along with that saying, ahhaha, go me and my terrible editing skills! >:D< thank you for pointing that out
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I give the best feedback for the best fics! :x this makes me so happy you've no idea. I love people who live furiously. Ahaha, our linguistic biases = thumbs up! I love sentences that are somehow unconventional and perfect that way.
<33333333 of course! Also, I think you would really love the short story "Snow" by Ann Beattie; we read it for creative writing class and I adore it. When I get back to school tomorrow I will see if I can type it up for you. I have a file of me reading it but I forgot where I put it. :">
i have most of the album, thank you teh_music. >:D< i'm trying to avoid p2p networks out of paranoia, so i'm still missing a few songs from syof (kasjg :>) and most of their earlier stuff. which i will no doubt accumulate somehow. *obsessive music blog reader, yes*
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01. Scorching and vengeful. This is perfect. At first I was like, title :-? but then I am like, la Boca del Cielo, yes. :D
02. The light sparking on his glasses! Too bright to look at him! It's the perfect feel of white hot summer, so familiar, especially movie-ized, like everything is solarized.
03. Diego was bad at stillness. omg.
04. I love how Gael sunscreening his back is so - opposite of cliche. I don't know how to express this better. It's just that, everything that goes along with the thought of someone sunscreening someone else's back - this isn't it. And I love that so much. Fingers digging into the edge of his shoulder blade! The scientific sound of it, the protrusion of calcium. Oh you.
05. Diego wanted to say, you're smoking your fifth cigarette of the day and I'm being baked to death and coated in sunscreen and we're shooting a goddamned movie, that's what we're doing. I love this sentence and I can't explain why but I do.
06. He thought, your problem is that you aren't ( ... )
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and, darling, ilu a lot. i don't think this one is a striking as the first, but i think the next one might be? i'm an ideas person, mostly, as in i can't really write well without at least one clear perfect moment that i have to write out. :-? and this one was more forced than the previous.
yeah, i think the whole sunscreening thing might have been my unconscious trying not so subtly to insert UST, but i was thinking about the physicality of it all, of the summer and the sun and the strange suddeness of being there and alive and young. i have an obsession with the juxtaposition of science and romanticism. i don't know.
i think he does live furiously, maybe. there's something urgent about him in his pictures, in the interviews, something that pushes and jumps out at me. or i might just be kind of obsessed ahhhh.
along with that saying, ahhaha, go me and my terrible editing skills! >:D< thank you for pointing that out ( ... )
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I give the best feedback for the best fics! :x this makes me so happy you've no idea. I love people who live furiously. Ahaha, our linguistic biases = thumbs up! I love sentences that are somehow unconventional and perfect that way.
<33333333 of course! Also, I think you would really love the short story "Snow" by Ann Beattie; we read it for creative writing class and I adore it. When I get back to school tomorrow I will see if I can type it up for you. I have a file of me reading it but I forgot where I put it. :">
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i have to go watch the movie now.
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i haven't seen the movie yet because of the rating, but i know what happens in it and, oh. :x
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it came out when i was in hawaii and i went to a little indie place to see it and just.
it's gorgeous (they're gorgeous) up on the big screen and all the colours are so vibrant.
i really love this movie, lol.
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and will there be more??
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i love the conversation, i love the on-set feel, i love you and them and them together and you writing them together and everything. ♥
+ you are listening to stars omg omg HART a;kdf.
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STARS IS AMAZING. holy saljgsdf. yes. i went around looking for some of their music after your post and slkgj, okay. *tumbles into love!*
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