this is not a joke so please stop smiling.

[windsor]

As requested by zauberer_sirin. I'm so pleased that you're feeling the Veronica Mars love! Can be read as a follow up to living is what kills you and movies of your dreams, if you'd like.

Comments

[zauberer_sirin]

gotta run to watch House at my grandmother´s so i´ll comment extensively later but...

Logan + second person = love.

You = love.

*icons explains feelings towards you right now*

[zauberer_sirin]

so. real comment here.

i love everything about this piece, starting with the structure, so scattered & at the same time fitting & so heartaching and Logan-ish.

the beginning is simply genius. that first part is my favourite bit of the whole fic.

She will have gone to Stanford on a scholarship, book royalties, and some quick, discreet motel stake-outs between doing AP reading and breaking into houses.

i love Veronica through Logan´s eyes; it´s totally her, and at the same time totally Logan, how he bares people to the basics.

(somebody asked me to write Logan/Veronica for them and i´m totally stealing you a lot of ideas here)

He gets up and walks out of the room without looking at you, and everything you wanted to say sinks back down into nothingness. you put your finger on everything i believe about Logan & Duncan´s friendship, how it´s really a matter of convenience to some point. i can see how, for somebody like Logan being friends with someone like Duncan is easy, almost aenesthetic

[windsor]

Darling, I'm just thrilled that you enjoyed it! I was really nervous about posting because I'm not involved in the VMars fandom much, if at all.

Your comment, just, alsdjflkdjf. What can I say. :x You give the best feedback; it means loads. I can't wait to see your take on Logan, because everything you've said in this comment and previously has always struck me as so true about the character, so. ♥ ♥ ♥.

[windsor]

I'm sorry for the angst! Logan is just one messed up boy. ;;) I'm glad you enjoyed it, though; thank you for reading and commenting.

[sadiekate]

Gosh, I wish you felt emo more often, because you just have such a lovely way with words. Your Logan is excellent and bitter and hopeful. This was a lovely piece, even better than the previous two you linked, which is hard to do.

[windsor]

Can I just take a moment to express the depths of my love for your icon? Yeah. :">

Logan brings out the angst, you know. Thank you so much for reading this (and the previous two! ♥) and feedbacking, it's always great to know that I'm not just taking stabs in the dark in regards to writing certain characters and such.

[sadiekate]

Hee, isn't the icon great? Got it ages ago from crystalkirk - it's survived about four rounds of icon-purging.

No, you really do have a great voice, very fresh - I hope you start exploring the fandom more.

[arabian]

This is the kinda thing that I don't think that Rob Thomas gets. He has presented us with such a completely fucked-up Logan -- that you've captured beautifully -- and Jason acts the hell out of that we're left wanting nothing more than to make it all better for him. Excellent job.

[windsor]

Oh, exactly. It's really pretty striking how messed up Logan is at the moment - I mean that seriously, too, he's a complete mess, and I can't wait to see how the show deals with him. Jason Dohring is brilliant, and sometimes I just want to hug him and feed him cookies before I realize that even though a lot of things have gone wrong for him, Logan also has this real malicious streak to him, you know? God, that is a long sentence. Sorry for rambling. :x Thank you for the lovely comment!

[helpme_dream]

Emo second person writing makes me happy. Nice work, my favorite part would be "You feel like yelling, you think you're fucked up? You think you've got it bad, what with your dead sister and epilepsy and fucking lack of emotion?" I think this made my day, and inspired me to write second person, doubt I will actually do it but... thanks

[windsor]

Me too! :) Seriously though, thank you for reading and commenting - I do hope you try your hand at second person, it's ridiculously fun. Secretly, I love Duncan a little bit, but he's just so easy to mock, you know?