Comments | windswept_fic: Into the Unknown (4/4) NC-17, co-authored with sheesusnat

windswept_fic

Into the Unknown (4/4) NC-17, co-authored with sheesusnat

Jul 05, 2007 17:52

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When I saw Gilbert's eyes close, I felt a surge of victory. Now this was winning at its best. Now I had his full attention.

The internal cheering section was silenced quickly as I returned to the task I'd paused. I squeezed my hands tighter at his hips and slid my mouth lower on his cock. I licked and sucked and swallowed, moved down to the ( Read more... )

@ team: columbus blue jackets, gilbert brule, @ team: pittsburgh penguins, series: into the unknown, sidney crosby, rating: nc-17

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skye_chan14 July 8 2007, 07:02:20 UTC

Aflskjdflksjdf.

I'll comment better later. Suffice to say: A:Lkjdflskjdf. >>

skye_chan14 July 8 2007, 17:11:47 UTC

So, last night, this was just the perfect ending to an amazing day. This is definitely one of my most favorite fics EVER.

AND WHY DON'T YOU TWO COLLABORATE MORE OFTEN? >>

♥♥♥

sheesusnat July 8 2007, 18:35:10 UTC

I'm going to see if I can't nag her into another one ;)

skye_chan14 July 8 2007, 18:41:48 UTC

First of all: ALKflksdjflsdkjf icon.

Secondly: EEEE YAY. ♥ *glomp* XD

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vermetteian July 9 2007, 08:03:31 UTC

ahh that's wonderful...u've succeeded in making my hormones run high [if u know what i mean *cough* horny *cough* haha....i need to call my bf to come over now lol]
please do write more :) i enjoyed reading this one very very much

tremblay88 July 10 2007, 01:23:29 UTC

wow. that was one of the best fics ive ever read!
loveddd itt!
awesome job!

mosgirl9 July 10 2007, 04:46:07 UTC

The two of you did an excellent job with this. I was prepared to not like it, and was sucked in almost immediately. The only thing I would suggest is to do something more than one little dash line to represent the change of pov. But then, I'm old school and don't like to guess whose pov I'm reading. ;)
Again, great job!

xsavedbygracex August 31 2008, 10:04:24 UTC

Ok... I'm more than a year late on this, I know, and I'm sorry. I wouldn't normally comment at all, so late, but this... it felt necessary.

I can't properly describe the feeling I got from this story. The entire thing was just full of sheer, raw emotion. The imagery of the club, in my head, Gilbert's appearance, it was all so perfect and I can't get the pictures out of my mind. The hatred that he felt towards Sid, Sid's competitiveness, it all seemed so undeniably realistic in a way that I don't think I've ever read before. Just these basic human emotions, these two deadly sins, wrath and pride, and the way they were balanced in the first two chapters, it was just fucking phenomenal ( ... )