Oh, it was all I wanted, and more. This verse is so seamless. There isn't anything where I go 'hm, this doesn't quite fit, but I'll go with it anyways'. It's all so perfect. And awesome. And did I mention perfect?
Oh, awesome! I'm really glad when the story looks to be seamless; the whole point is to merge the two universes as neatly as possible. I'm so pleased it worked. *G*
This is beautiful. I know nothing about White collar, and I'm seriously considering downloading it right now and getting on with it, because I really want to know Neal now. I love how you portray their characters, Arthur and Eames are perfect, and their relationship is beautiful. You ccan see the trust and the love and care without it being sappy, and this being told from Neal's POV makes it even better.
Oh you must download it! Matt Bomer is amazing, and the chemistry between him and Tim DeKay really is extraordinary. There's totally an Eames/Arthur parallel there as well. *G*
I'm glad you don't think it's too sappy! Sometimes I wonder. I'm an awful sucker for sap.
I was just going to refresh the fill page and then I saw this! I just... asdjfhasd can this be any more awesome? *_____* You have my soul. This crossover is really, really my favourite ♥
I went into this story having no idea who Neal was or what White Collar may have been, but something told me to just read this, and somewhere by the fourth paragraph you had me.
This is divine. I can sit here and gush all day, but your words had me gripped by the front, and I literally could not tear my eyes away. The characterizations are beautiful, the dialogue is perfect, and thanks to your fantastic imagery and the like, I could picture everything. Vividly.
Aww, awesome! I really do find it terribly flattering when someone who hasn't seen any of one side of a crossover still finds it readable. I'm pleased I could make things come to life for you!
Wow, I simply love this 'verse. The suspense in the living room had my mind frantically scrabbling for solutions; I'm usually more than content to let a fic unroll on its own.
I hope you'll consider writing more of this 'verse. :D
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Oh, it was all I wanted, and more. This verse is so seamless. There isn't anything where I go 'hm, this doesn't quite fit, but I'll go with it anyways'. It's all so perfect. And awesome. And did I mention perfect?
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I look forward to the rest of the series.
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I'm glad you don't think it's too sappy! Sometimes I wonder. I'm an awful sucker for sap.
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I MEAN, /SCREAMS
I was just going to refresh the fill page and then I saw this! I just... asdjfhasd can this be any more awesome? *_____* You have my soul. This crossover is really, really my favourite ♥
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YAY MORE SOULS. :D
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This is divine. I can sit here and gush all day, but your words had me gripped by the front, and I literally could not tear my eyes away. The characterizations are beautiful, the dialogue is perfect, and thanks to your fantastic imagery and the like, I could picture everything. Vividly.
I WILL BE BACK FOR MORE. Excellent work! :)
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I hope you'll consider writing more of this 'verse. :D
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There shall definitely be more! The muses won't shut up.
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