[Fanfic] Heaven (Oneshot - Part 2)

Aug 12, 2015 00:36



At my 17, I saw him truant.

It was a boring day, there were only whole subjects that I hated, I fell asleep in the class. This time, I pretended that I was sick to skip it, luckily that my teacher didn't doubt anything about this.

I went to shool roof and was about to take a nap there, but I got really surprised to see him here. After all ( Read more... )

hsj: yamada ryosuke, hsj:takaki yuya, type: oneshot, pairing: takayama

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tasuku_kyota August 12 2015, 01:33:58 UTC
wait, let me cry first

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tasuku_kyota August 12 2015, 01:45:41 UTC
i love the plot!! the storyline is <3
that was natural for ryosuke to hate yuya on his age, bcs he was used to be spoiled by his dad, and suddenly a stranger comes
and yuya, too, is basically a nice guy so he didn't fight back ryosuke
and all of those insecurities which appeared when yuya stepped aback from him is <3
OMG I LOVE THIS ANGST!!!!

and and, ryochan is indeed a stubborn brat
but then he regretted everything and suicide
and and... the last parts, the last sentences are...
/wiping tears/

pls write more like this TwT

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windy_0809 August 12 2015, 14:16:20 UTC
Thank you so much for reading and commenting for my fic!! T-T I also got teary eyes when writing this !!!!!! T-T Angst genre always brings a deep & heavy feeling so it's really hard to write for me, I'm always afraid that I fail ... but after all, I was able to finish it !! I'm really glad that someone likes my fic, thank you!^^

Haha. I found Ryo-chan cute even when he's just a stubborn brat like that XD actually he likes Yuya, remember how he got all worried when Yuya sulking with him? and yes Yuya is really a good & knowing guy T-T I feel bad when letting my baby die like that but after all they still can be together in the heaven, I see it as a happy ending .

Thank you for supporting *^^*

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tasuku_kyota August 13 2015, 01:02:07 UTC
ii yo, i love to read more takayama ^^

pls write more abt them, angst or fluff, i love both, because they're one of my fav pairings ^^

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kokoromiinah August 12 2015, 08:47:32 UTC
It's a long time.... seeing a story of TakaYama T^T
I really love it! T^T
Thank you~

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windy_0809 August 12 2015, 14:21:35 UTC
I'm glad that you like it *^^* Yes TakaYama fics are really rare recently ... I just found they're such a great pair n really want more stories for them T-T

Thank you for reading and commenting *^^*

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lunamond August 17 2015, 18:51:19 UTC
Your story was beautiful. Even though I'm really sad that Yuya died.
But in the end they were back together. Although it was in the heaven but there should be our two angels right?
I really liked your story. You should write more often.

See you~!

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windy_0809 August 18 2015, 12:05:43 UTC
Hai . I'll try if I have time ^^

Yes they are. Yuya dies to save the person he loves,I really feel pity for Ryosuke , I let him suffer too much but that shows how much he loves Yuya. And pity for Yuya too, he dies when still not yet to know his lover's true answer, so I bring Ryosuke for him so that they can be happy together forever.

Thank you so much for supporting me =^^=

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juju905rote August 26 2015, 19:54:12 UTC
This is so so late, but I want to comment because this story is so touching!

Ryosuke was such a brat to Yuya, but he is still cute that way ;; And I like how he eventually falls for Yuya.
Poor Yuya ;; poor Ryosuke too ;; I hope they'll at least be happy in heaven ;;;;

I hope you write more Windy-chan :)

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windy_0809 August 28 2015, 12:43:37 UTC
No this is not late , Beni-chan XD I want to say thank you for always supporting me & TakaYama like this ^^ I'm glad ^^

They'll be happy there ,of course :x Though both of them died but in my fic, Yuya & Ryosuke MUST be together forever , no matter what happened ^^

Writing about them is one of my favorites, I feel all my stress & tiredness gone just by that, I'll try if I have time, thank you so much !

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brnyt May 24 2016, 08:34:53 UTC
Uwaaaaaaaaaa
Did ryosuke commit suicide????

TakaYama 😍😍😍😍 endless love

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windy_0809 May 24 2016, 09:31:36 UTC
Yeah I brought him to Yuya in this fic. TakaYama is really a great couple in my eyes ^^ endless love !! <33 Thank u so muchhhhhhh for supporting !!! =^^=

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