well here it is

[wingdangl]

my first published attempt at some "creative" writing. Hope you enjoy it... and i will try my best to not make it my last

Comments

[tjousk]

Many thoughts on this...
Most shall remain unsaid.
Well written, I felt like I was there, watching from the shadows.

[wingdangl]

Thank you. thats kind of you to say

[isis420]

I thought that was beautiful. I related to it as well. That's the thing I like most about your writing, you put whoever's reading it right there. *sniff* You made me get all ferclemped in my computer lab at school.

[wingdangl]

^.^ Thank you very much. i was hoping i hadnt lost my touch.

heeh Ferclemped.

[wingdangl]

Thanks Aron! thats exactly what i was looking for. its been a long time since i used proper grammer, even longer since I tried my hand at Creative writing. I appreicate all your assistance, But I may need more explaination on that little Symbol you keep using. Ive never heard of it O.O

[wingdangl]

Correction... yes i have, it was just coming up as a totally differnt symbol in my Email... i made the editing and it Flows so much better now. thank you very much

[jeffn]

Very nice :)

[wingdangl]

Danke

always a pleasure

[blossom_angel]

I remember when we were kids, you were almost constantly scribbling some poem or short story into a tattered old note book. I always loved being your audience for such stories.. needless to say your writing skills have somwhat matured since those days! Ive always said you are a great writer, your still the writer in the family.

Re: always a pleasure

[wingdangl]

Meep^.^ thanks where are you posting from?? i thought youhad no intarweb?