Fic - Concession

[winged_sandals]

Nothing quite like procrastinating to get the creative juices flowing~ One day I'll write a story with a plot. One day.

Title: Concession
Series: Saiyuki
Word count: 515
Warnings: Worksafe, fluff
Characters/Pairings: Gojyo/Hakkai
Description: "Hakkai kissed him."

Comments

[lauand]

Ooooooohh!! Wonderful!!

Who needs plots? This was so IC that I don't think necessary to create a situation or an atmosphere or nothing, really, because it fits the original manga so well.

Loved the awkwardness and the depth of all the little details you gave (like Hakkai's body language or the implications of comparing looking at Hakkai with looking at one's hand. You're saying it all without really saying it).

But what really melt me was the "I didn't hate it". I'm such a sap...

Thank you for this!

[winged_sandals]

Thank you so much! (Very fitting icon XD) I'm glad to have pleased a fellow sap, ha

[pfmoi]

DAAAAAAAW, so cute! I love how they dance around each other and don't really say anything, but still manage to say everything. It's awesome.

[winged_sandals]

Thank you! I was trying for something like one of those Nothing Conversations that Minekura does so well, so I'm glad that at least some of that effect came across XD

[winged_sandals]

Oh yes, certainly X3

I'm glad it made you happy during your sickly battle against your computer! You need to get better! D:

YES TOTALLY. IT WILL BE 1000000000000000 VOLUMES LONG!

And thanks as usual for commenting, by the way

[winged_sandals]

That's good that you're finally starting to feel better! Being sick during summer should be illegal somehow

The Nobel Prize of AWESOME should be our new goal for life XD

Like chicken soup~

[jaxinthebox]

Aw! Beautiful!

[winged_sandals]

Thank you! ^^

[winged_sandals]

Thank you very much!