Gojyo+Goku Fic

[winged_sandals]

For a prompt of "Russian Roulette," hence the title.  This may be a bit of an obtuse interpretation of that but...  I finished within the week, anyway, ha.  Or at least I think I did.  It was a pretty close call XD  (Except I can't remember.  Was our new schedule a week or less than that?  Do I need to be punched, Marie?)

This was kind of quick, so

Comments

[kansouame]

I think this was really sweet. I do adore when Gojyo and Goku banter. ^_^

[winged_sandals]

Thank you! So do I <3

[purpleicicles]

Lovelovelove the characterisation in this! Their interactions are just right for their dynamic, and there was a little edge of sorrow that fit really well with Gojyo's character. Spotted two typos;

The cigarette dangled from the corner of his mouth and a few ashes just barely missed singing a daisy’s petals. singing --> singeing? I've never been entirely sure for this one ^^;;;

Gojyo looked at him for a moment in a weird sort of way. Like he was trying to look passed his face or something. passed --> past

I love the line above, by the way - Gojyo does have the odd perceptive moment, but there's also a tinge of despair, which is a really complex expression to try and get across.

[winged_sandals]

Eep! Thanks so much for the typo spot! (I hate passed/past. I never get it right XD)

[theskywasblue]

Aww...this is just incredibly sweet. I love the way you write Goku and Gojyo interacting together (I think Gojyo is at least partially right though, Goku probably will get shot at at the very least lol)

[winged_sandals]

I'm sure Hakkai is sitting around somewhere during all this with a first aid kit in his lap just in case, haha. Thanks for commenting!

[clytemnaestra]

Awww :) Gojyo's such a softie.

[winged_sandals]

He is~ *squishes him* Thanks for commenting!

[jakondas]

Very sweet. Poor Goku, he tries so hard...

[winged_sandals]

Thanks for commenting!