Entry #21 (PART 2)

[umberela]

(PART 1)

Comments

[dreamrainydays]

:( so in love.
one day, i will be able to write characters like this. hopefully.

[darleenk]

DON'T BE RIDICULOUS, YOUR CHARACTERS ARE ALREADY AWESOME.

ilu, and once again, thank you. ♥

[loveisonthemenu]

10 OUT OF 10

first contest entry i read (cos long stuff comes first, ofc) and it already made me into an incoherent bitch.

[darleenk]

lmfao, amy, ilusm. AND YAY FOR THE 2PM~

[loveisonthemenu]

la la la la la pretty baby la la la la la la be my lady, ceri~

lol, i am here to give you the non-serious comments.

[darleenk]

idk what song this is from~ but sure~

ilthemsm.

[lovelessending]

the ending made me kinda spazz a little (a little? maybe reword to A LOT kekeke) but, aish. the focus, the colours, the wings changing colour, kyuhyun changing, the drugs, donghae, zhoumi. all of it. aish, it was just so amazing, and you, you wrote so MUCH, and the characterisations were just. goodness. i love you, dear anon. you should write like this all the time! long long long stories where we have to just curl up and read :D

[darleenk]

THANK YOU, LALA. idek what to say, but ilu~ and i love how you appreciate the longfic. :D -hugs-

[lovelessending]

S'NOT COOL. YOU DID THIS TO ME, RIRI. I NEVER USED TO LIKE LONGFIC T___T NOW I'M LIKE, 'PSH, IT'S UNDER 20K'

yes. you should flesh this out. :DDDD and then repost repost repost kekekek

[hyungdeul]

this was really wonderful, and unusual, and beautiful. i could sit back and read this for days and not get tired. ♥

thanks so much for writing, and THANK YOU for once again making my life hard ;__; so many great entries!

[darleenk]

ohhhh, thank youuu. ♥ -hugs- ;~; did you know on the memes people are like, darleenk and hyungdeul should collab? I THINK WE SHOULD TOTALLY DO IT. :D

[fivethreerin]

omg woah. WOAHHHH. everything about this was just, woah, i just kept going, "what the heck, what the heck WHAT THE HECK!" all in a very, very good way, i promise you. it's like, "what the heck why so good *cries*" kind of thing.

zhou mi and his gangsta designer clothes asdfhglfkgjldkh.

and
“I think I’ll wake up with them blue tomorrow,” he says.

i don't think you meant it to be intentional, but then that song started playing in my head....

[darleenk]

i'm glad it was a good way! :D

LOL ZHOU MI TOTALLY HAS GANGSTA CLOTHES. zhou mi has every type of clothes~

sobs, jaeroticgasm pointed that out to me and i died, omfggggg. i wondered why the line kept standing out to me as weird. orzzz.