Super junior China (hanchul)

Mar 30, 2008 19:54

Preparations were being made and it seemed like an eternal departure instead of just a couple months, which it was. Heechul could feel the apprehension within their dorms, wafting from one room to the next until the whole house was overwhelmed with tears. he could feel it melt through his insides like acid then bubble up, making his eyes water. The ( Read more... )

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kahel16 March 31 2008, 03:52:33 UTC
Aww, that's so sad for Heechul :( But it was nice for Hankyung to leave a message like that.

I love this <33 And I hope that they won't break up (or be like this) when Suju-C debuts :(

I wanted to read more of your fics, but the Adult Content Warning popped up so I can't read any other XD

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xprissx March 31 2008, 16:19:55 UTC
hahas, that was heartbreaking.and i've always love hanchul pairing. :)

anyway , erm , just sharing how i feel ? The chinese pinyin ...it isn't very smooth flowing and kind of awkward ? :)

"wo jun de ai ni" should be [ wo zhen de ai ni] and so forth. there are some errors in the pinyin . :)

cheerios.

and i love the whole plot. it's so heartbreaking since SJC is debuting today too.

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wingless_4ng3l April 1 2008, 04:10:04 UTC
me not very good at ping yin :d but thanx for telling me
*goes fix right away*

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xprissx April 1 2008, 14:01:22 UTC
do you need help ? :)

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wingless_4ng3l April 2 2008, 01:35:26 UTC
if i do, i'll tell you. :d thank you very much

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lucid_acolyte March 31 2008, 17:39:42 UTC
they are debuting today...So I really want to see everything what will happen @____@
and the hanchul...rella, hannie will always be in your heart and vice versa so don't fret~ >__<
<333 the story~!!

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littleryu_chan March 31 2008, 18:38:53 UTC
Awwww~~ That was so touching
<3333

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happy_gogogo March 31 2008, 19:28:38 UTC
T_T! But very well written!

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