Title: Ever After (Paradox)
Author: wings_strength9
Pairing: Sihan
Warnings: some curse words
Summary: Siwon realizes there is something he should remember but can't. (flashes and memories of once upon a time)
A/n: this was started before SJM debuted 8D. based off the Timeless!verse. (also, D: where has all the Sihan gone?).
It started with Siwon.
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I KNOW. where has all the sihan gone? D:
actually since it was before SJM debuted Henry was put in like last minute. and if i had known about Zhoumi he probably would have been smushed in there also XD i'm so glad you think everyone is in charecter
Thank you so much!
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I like how you portrayed Siwon and his "violent tendencies." There was a real pain there that couldn't be avoided by him, and seeing him unknowingly act it out in moments of sheer panic was utterly heartbreaking.
I really liked how Henry worked into this storyline. Especially his unintentional, and then intentional, attachment to Hannieah. You made him both weak and amazingly strong.
Please continue to write! This was such a moving piece and I greatly enjoyed the style you chose for your words. It was wonderful to read a good SiHan again, (They're becoming far between.) with some actual substance.
Thank you again for sharing!
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seriously, your comment makes me beyond happy :D especially how you think it flows, because i wrote it by writing scenes as they came to me and later connecting them together. so when i looked back i thought ....its..so choppy..*twitch*
I'm glad Siwon's violent tendencies came through, i thought people would be confused about that.
and since it's you I'll tell you. (secret) Henry used to be Donghae and Donghae used to be Eunhyuk in the beginning of the story before I changed it but then i had to had to add in Henry. I'm happy he fits T.T
I wonder why they are becoming so few..
(I hope so, but this fic fried my brains and frustrated me to no ends)
Thank you!
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I am happy that Henry was added in still, and once again, I found your Donghae to be incredibly charming and very real in certain aspects.
Can I also add that I "geeked" about Hannie wearing Siwon's shirt? It really made me smile. =^^=
I'm curious as to why they are becoming so few too, it's rather sad. Even the SiHanHae are becoming few, which makes me quite sad.
Always take joy in your writing even if it's frustrating. It makes it that much more rewarding for yourself. Once again, thank you for your work, I am openly going to say that I am proud to be one of your Fangirls!
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you can, because I was hoping you would notice that 8D I made such a big deal out of it when it appeared in Impasse.
maybe because hankyung is working really hard and being all serious about being SJM leader?
... T.T thank you
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i thought it was gonna be depressing like the timeless mv, but im so glad i carried on reading.
you just made my week ^^
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I'm glad :D
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ㅠ.ㅠ♥
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