my book

[wingsofplasma]

hey everybody! I know almost no one will read this, but I would like people (if any) to give me feedback on the first chapter of my book, titled SHAHIM. keep in mind that this is the first draft. if I get feedback, then i will post more chapters. the first chapter is pretty much the worst, but is really important for the rest of the story. it also

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i just want to see what it looks like

[shatterglass02]

hello, me! loopy-dooooooooooooo!

hey

[anonymous]

hey kool chapter like thing well gotta go(stupid packing)

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