Comments | winkspandaswink: my halloween haiku

winkspandaswink

Oct 10, 2005 20:50

trick or treat, children.
want to come inside for drinks?
a child molester

Comments 10

antiquedaisies October 11 2005, 01:56:00 UTC

i love it. submit it.

winkspandaswink October 11 2005, 11:51:51 UTC

I want to.

I'm afraid Mrs. Fry would give me a wierd look or something though.

bethanizzle October 11 2005, 01:58:34 UTC

BEST. HAIKU. EVER.

jtgotsjets October 11 2005, 02:14:46 UTC

last line is a syllable short, if we're being strict with the format.

winkspandaswink October 11 2005, 11:52:14 UTC

oh wait, child is only one syllable.

my bad.

jtgotsjets October 11 2005, 15:23:41 UTC

its alright, the most important part of a haiku is that its spiritual, the syllable count is secondary.

female_foiler October 11 2005, 02:44:30 UTC

nice

xxdanabellexx October 11 2005, 03:09:55 UTC

Creeeeepy