Immature, for pattitoo

Aug 29, 2016 18:06

Title: Immature
Recipient: pattitoo
Pairing: Mino/Seungyoon
Rating: PG
Warnings: mention of past bullying and weight-based teasing
Summary: Years after Minho last saw nationwide superstar Kang Seungyoon, he's hired to be his bodyguard.
Notes: To my recipient, thank you for so many cute prompts! I kind of mixed a couple of them around here so I hope this ( Read more... )

pairing: mino/seungyoon, ! 2016, rating: pg

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anonymous August 30 2016, 12:41:45 UTC
Aaww this was so cute!
I wish it was konger though!
But still this was perfect! Thank you for writing it!
Lots of love!!

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anonymous August 30 2016, 12:43:24 UTC
Damn you my big fingers
I made lots of typo sorry! Lol
It was supposed to be LONGER not konger lmao

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galmaegi September 4 2016, 20:47:49 UTC
thank you for reading! i wish it was longer too >__>

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idolkiller September 3 2016, 03:28:32 UTC
THIS IS GREAT U LIAR i love this premise!!!!! everyone's roles fit them so perfectly and true props to your canon shoutouts, those are always my fav and yours slot in so well!!! ksy's dark bully/bullying past coinciding with mino's dark past and their ensuing perfect adult roles, HANHAE AND P.O. mino's perfect bitten back pettiness and ksy being not a bad guy per se but still... totally a dick... how realistic (showing up at the door shirtless). all the little background and setting-building details make me wish this was much longer, as always u__u, but you pulled the development off so cleanly and at a good length i guess i can't complain...

p.s. TAEHYUN, THE MORE EXPENSIVE VERSION OF SEUNGYOON

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galmaegi September 4 2016, 23:47:09 UTC
HMPH!! (by which i mean ty :*) i really wanted to write this idea once i figured out how to link it to canon... it's not exactly the reformed iljin ksy fic of my (your? our?) dreams but it is what it is u__u i wanted to go on more about the details of the show (and make seunghoon ksy's manager) but time... anyway ty for reading and forgive me for barging in on your fic u__u

p.s. ISN'T IT TRUE!

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pattitoo September 4 2016, 03:57:11 UTC
First off, I wanna say sorry that I wasn't able to comment earlier because it was a really busy week for me huhu but when I had time to read it I just squeaaaalleeeed! Thank you so so much, this was sooo cute! I think you merged two prompts here, right??? I don't remember the prompts anymore but I'm so happy you chose minyoon and I enjoyed this so much! I'm already weak to rockstar Kang Seungyoon who likes to sleep around (giggles) but add bodyguard Mino in the mix and I'm just dead. I love their dynamic, I love the depth both characters showed despite the short time they reunited. I love the hints of attraction Mino felt for Seungyoon despite outwardly 'hating' him, and the later confession that a part of him changed because of Seungyoon. The angst is such a nice touch (I live for it) but the promise of something more at the end just made me grin sooo widely, I know that it's the start of something new, as the people they've become past their middle school selves. *heart eyes* I'm just imagining a romance in the future and I'm ( ... )

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galmaegi September 4 2016, 20:46:05 UTC
don't worry about it and thank you for being patient, i know you had to wait a while ;;; and for your first winnerexchange experience too ;;;;;;

i was a bit worried because i took from one of your prompts about mino and ksy reuniting but sort of the opposite dynamic to what i ended up going with... so i'm glad you still liked this! (even if you don't remember the original ha) i'm not very confident about writing minyoon so i just tried to make it make sense in the story, so i'm happy that it worked for you. (and that you liked the kangnam mention, hehehe.) i would've liked to have gone on more about what happens next but i think you can imagine enough :3

also i liked so many of your other prompts that i started writing little odds and ends of them, so if i end up finishing any (we'll see) i'll let you know!

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