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Fic: Somnolence (Last Thoughts)

Nov 02, 2006 02:22

Title Somnolence (Last Thoughts)

Author: Winoniel

Rating: NC-17

Word Count: 8220

Summary: Rescued from Death Eaters, Severus has the time to reconsider his relationship with the Boy Who Lived.

Warnings: Non-con, violence (briefly, in beginning); slash; a little angst, a little romance. HBP-compliant.

A/N: Byrdie, I tried ( Read more... )

Comments 2

patrie55 August 10 2008, 12:00:37 UTC

To my great regret, reasoned,constructive critiques are not my strong point. Therefore,all that I can really say is: I loved this story. So gentle and beautiful (after the first part, of course). And in character, not an easy thing to do with post-HBP Snarry.

Just one question. What was Harry painting?

Tks, Patrie55

winoniel August 11 2008, 03:29:14 UTC

Thanks so much for your comments, I really enjoy hearing everyone's reactions to what I wrote--critique or not! I like the fact that you thought it was "gentle and beautiful" as that was something that I was really striving for!

I had it in my head that Harry was painting a landscape of the garden.....