UPDATE WHOA

Aug 04, 2005 00:13

I finished and posted Chapter 24 of What Family Means. Yay!

The chapter has been there for about an hour, so if anyone happened to read it during that time you might feel like knowing I'd forgotten to write Reviewer Responses. I wrote them up a few minutes ago and posted them.

Whee!

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What Family Means review anonymous August 4 2005, 11:00:57 UTC
Lucius seems to have a separate agenda for the two boys if the conversation in the barn between Harry and Draco is anything to go by. Is it to make Harry more vulnerable than just being pregnant? Separate him from the herd so-to-speak? I suspect your Lucius is about power and for all his other feelings about Harry, he must realize Harry has power--and so would his Malfoy-fathered child.

Very interesting physical changes you have Harry going through during pregnancy. And the make-up scene was interesting. Harry seems to be in a more "needing comfort" state of pregnancy and Draco is stepping forward to help. Still, it is good that Harry doesn't just forgive and forget. They need to work on things if they are to continue together and become parents.

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Re: What Family Means review winsome1 August 4 2005, 20:28:17 UTC
You're right when it comes to Lucius. There's more to it than what he's telling each boy. More on that later...

I'm glad you like it that Harry doesn't forgive him right away. Some people have been hounding me to simply get them together and make the fall in love, but I don't think it's that easy. Also, Harry's physical changes were much fun to write. :o)

Thanks for reading!

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alloveryou August 4 2005, 12:53:09 UTC
OMG AN UPDATE!!!...You're Alive?! OMG *dead*

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winsome1 August 4 2005, 20:33:17 UTC
:D :D :D

*not dead*

:D :D :D

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ex_ella_bane358 August 4 2005, 14:51:04 UTC
Hello! I didn't know you had a live journal :) I'm glad to "meet" you in LJ :D

I'll have to tell you now that I don't seek out mpreg or making guys effeminate in fan fiction, but you know what? I like how you've done this. Thank you for writing such an engaging story.

This last chapter was lovely. I very much liked the two of them making love the second time. Harry's comment of Oh stop, before I fall in love had me giggling. And hee hee, Draco having been a virgin was too funny :) Great job! I have you friended now.

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winsome1 August 4 2005, 20:42:20 UTC
Why, hello!

That's the biggest compliment, when someone says they like my story even though they're not usually inclined to mpreg (or effeminate boys, in this case!). So thanks very much. It makes it all the more fun to write, knowing that. :D

*friends back*

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amandapixielee August 4 2005, 22:30:37 UTC
Yay, i love you... ok not really love you but yes i'm happy now... >^,,^< i am a happy cat.

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winsome1 August 4 2005, 23:04:44 UTC
*pets the cat*

:D!

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winsome1 November 14 2005, 00:14:32 UTC
Whoa, I totally did not reply to this. I suck. Anyway, thank you very much. :o)

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