Comments | winsomeone: I bring fic

winsomeone

I bring fic

Jul 14, 2009 15:25

Set in what I've dubbed the Hellmouth Slice 'verse, this is the second in a series of one-shots written from Willie the bartender's POV. Thank you to ( Read more... )

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petzipellepingo July 14 2009, 20:52:22 UTC

Really great look at post-"Intervention" Spike and Buffy by an outsider.

Willie watched the Slayer start to turn in the direction of the exit, and then turn back around again, frowning slightly. Pulling a few bills out of her jacket pocket, she set them down gently on the bar beside the empty shot glass. Spike looked up in surprise and she smiled softly. “Put some food in your stomach along with the Jack, Spike. You’ll heal faster.”

What a lovely thought.

winsomeone July 15 2009, 02:54:08 UTC

Thank you Petzi, I'm glad you enjoyed it.

I was originally going to tell the timeframe of the story, but I thought it might read better if people didn't know beforehand.

I love the Willie icon!

petzipellepingo July 15 2009, 08:37:42 UTC

That's the work of zandra_x.

xc_runner50 July 14 2009, 21:40:41 UTC

I am loving Willie's View of Spike and Buffy from the outside. I loved the first story in this series and this one did not disappoint. The interaction between Spike and Buffy was brilliantly done too.

winsomeone July 15 2009, 02:56:42 UTC

Thank you!

Although it's taking longer than I thought, I am having a lot of fun writing these stories from Willie's POV-I'm glad you've enjoyed them, too.

slaymesoftly July 14 2009, 23:50:05 UTC

I loved this outsider's look at the changed dynamic after Glory's torture. Well done!

winsomeone July 15 2009, 03:01:41 UTC

Thank you.

The dynamic did change so much around that point,didn't it? The very reason I chose that spot in the timeframe. Although probably in the minority, I love the latter episodes of that season so much.

seapealsh July 15 2009, 02:58:21 UTC

I loved this story showing Spike after Glory's torture. I actually like Willie here - even though I know he's a weasel. And Buffy buying Spike some dinner was such a nice thought.

winsomeone July 15 2009, 16:26:18 UTC

Thank you. Poor Spike, Glory really tore him into little pieces. I always shudder at the scene where he's shown wrecked in his crypt.

zanthinegirl July 15 2009, 06:26:34 UTC

::Loves you::

What a perfect little slice of hellmouth life. Lovely characterizations!

winsomeone July 15 2009, 12:32:24 UTC

Thank you Z- I'm glad you enjoyed it. I had fun writing it.