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Fanfiction: His Greatest Accomplishment

Jul 07, 2009 17:55

Title: His Greatest Accomplishment
Fandom: Eyeshield 21
Summary: She was one of those people he found to be disgustingly pure, and no matter how much he antagonized her to try to get her to let one curse word slip past her lips, she never did. One-shot.
Rating: PG. Rating due only to Hiruma's potty mouth
Pairing: HiruMamo
Disclaimers: I only wish I ( Read more... )

fanfiction, hirumamo, eyeshield 21

Comments 8

bar_ohki July 8 2009, 04:11:13 UTC

This is your first!? How about that!

Very nicely done. I'm really pleased with how you turned it out.

And the idea of her saving her swearing until childbirth, priceless.

wintaerland July 8 2009, 23:00:19 UTC

I just didn't think that cursing is programmed in Mamori's brain, but as we know, childbirth can unleash some scary stuff

Thanks for reading and commenting!

lockedmonkee July 8 2009, 07:24:14 UTC

This was cute as fuck. Excellent piece for a first HiruMamo fic. <3

wintaerland July 8 2009, 23:00:50 UTC

Thank you, I'm glad you liked it

kiokushitakaa July 11 2009, 18:24:54 UTC

LOVE IT!

wintaerland July 16 2009, 16:59:28 UTC

:D

Thanks!

unityworldti_an August 9 2009, 17:10:49 UTC

Ow....i love the ending~~~~~
i really want to see their baby !!!!!!
Cool !!!! Loved it!!!

wintaerland August 10 2009, 05:13:59 UTC

Since she's the cause of Mamori's fabulous round of cussing, who wouldn't? :D

Thanks, I'm glad you liked it!