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[winter_machine]

"I was dead for three minutes, and let me tell you, when you are lying on a stretcher, gasping for what you think are your last breaths, you don't think that dying happy is better than living sad."

Pre-show:  Derek saves his sister's life.  Addison is with him.  It might have happened like this.

Comments

[xyliette]

I really have nothing to offer other than saying it's perfection. It's Derek caring and still being an ass, and Addison being torn between two things she loves, and a gorgeous telling of what I am positive can be the only way this story went.

I can see him never talking to her again after that with the way you described it. Wonderful. She hates when he drives like this. It's the little things I love with your work. They're so very...real life.

Thanks for the bedtime story. :)

[winter_machine]

Thanks so much for the feedback - insert HUGE sigh of relief and gratitude here. I too felt like this was the only way it could have happened. So glad my interpretation worked for you.