Winter of Wes Fiction

[a_phoenixdragon]

Here it is... My Winter of Wes posting - I have read so many good authors, I certainly hope this is even close to their calibur... So here it is, the fiction portion of today's serving of Wes fic - enjoy!!

Comments

[lmbossy]

It was almost too bad that the carnage was so beautiful in it's completeness, it's utter lack of remorse as it swallowed more and more of the surrounding area - but this only confirmed the belief that horror, in its entirety, was always hypnotic and graceful in its own way…
*ooh* I like this line ... and I like the way this is going ... for some reason, Wesley's attitude to Angel seems quite fitting, although I'm wondering exactly what has happened to him ... on to the next part :)

[a_phoenixdragon]

Still plunkin away on three - I hope you enjoy the end result! Thanks for the FB! That line is one of my favs, too!! *Squishes you in joy!*

[fan_spagle]

First, your style of writing is just breathtaking; I found I had to read it out loud, like I do with poetry...to get the full beauty of your words...because this is poetry!

Just a few more feet - and he would be redeemed…

The first part was wonderful, That Wes would go through this to prove to himself that he was so easily pushed aside...that he was more than a sacrifice...to feel like doing this would be the only way he could be worthy...to be redeemed...*sniff*

He just wondered how it had taken him so long to really notice…

How could Wes not hope...dream that his reality was more rose colored glasses than it was...with his father and the way his life had turned out...of course it would take his own death to figure it out! *sniff*

[a_phoenixdragon]

Wow! Thanks honey... I don't think I've ever been called breathtaking before... My mother says the poetry aspect is called 'stream of conciousness?'... Sometimes it works sometimes it doesn't... Thanks for the major ego-stroke...

I've always felt so sorry for Wes, and the only way I can express my regret and rage over his total desecration (lol) - was to write it out... I do it frequently *g*...

Poor, poor Wes....

*Snuggles you*