Winter of Wes Fiction

Feb 05, 2006 02:56

Here is Part Two...

As the Smoke Rises... Pt Two )

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lmbossy February 5 2006, 13:12:17 UTC
you've got this suspense thing down :)

Somehow, in the living darkness, he imagined he could hear the ripping shuffle of the blaze that had consumed what they once were
He squeezed his eyes shut, blocking out the view of the chaos and destruction below - turning his gaze inward - to the chaos and destruction within…
I love the use of darkness - whether it is giving Wesley the freedom to be himself or destorying him ... and as a representation of Angel, I guess it's both ...

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a_phoenixdragon February 5 2006, 19:46:34 UTC
Thanks, honey!! Wow! I feel so good reading your FB - I promise Part three is coming!! *Huggles you in total amazement and joy!*

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lmbossy February 5 2006, 21:27:20 UTC
well, you left me such wonderful feedback, I'll glad I've returned the favour even slightly :)
*huggles back*
*in best Oliver voice* more please? ;)

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a_phoenixdragon February 5 2006, 23:47:27 UTC
Your wish is my command!

*Tries to nod head and twinkle nose both at the same time - face freezes...*

uhhhh... Well, anyway - I posted more fic! *Huggles you!*

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yasminke February 5 2006, 19:07:31 UTC
Waiting patiently for part three...

Okay, impatiently.

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a_phoenixdragon February 5 2006, 19:47:59 UTC
Okay, impatiently.

LOL!! I promise it's coming - got a few kinks to work out! I'm glad you are enjoying this so far!! *Squishes you happily!*

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fan_spagle November 15 2006, 08:30:40 UTC
The silence was his answer…

Yes… He did…

YOU BASTARD, ANGEL!

leaving only an empty shell that walked the earth, a shade that wore the face of Wesley Wyndam-Pryce…

Okay, this whole part here with him thinking back, was wonderful and had to be my favorite part of this chapter. The love and hate he felt for Angel was so well written and just heart breaking to read…I read it two times over because I was blown away by its beauty and depth. In this part I felt like Wesley was saying this out loud…that he was in the room…VERY POWERFUL!

What a fool he had been - all these years -

" My mistake…"

Again with the Angel is an evil bastard…It is not Wes who is mistaken… it’s the jerk *cough*Angel*cough* who was stupid enough to hurt such a man!

" Yes… Yes, Wesley, I knew… As did you… So why are you even asking?" The vampire's voice washed over him, soothing, despairing and damning…It was Angel’s plan… why is he pushing it on Wes too! He making Wes, feel like he’s partly to blame for their deaths…but he’s not! And Angel is sucking him in ( ... )

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a_phoenixdragon November 16 2006, 02:16:25 UTC
Ahhh, yes - my fun with Angel! It's so much fun to make the 'good' guy a total ass... *Laughs* and Angel always made it so easy for me...

Oh honey! *Passes you a tissue* I can't say I'm sorry (tho' I am a little) - cause that's what I was going for... This fic was tons of fun to write, and can you believe it only took me two days? (Deadlines are a bitch, especially when they sneak up on ya! LOL)....

*Strangles Angel mentally* What? Oh, yeah right - bastard... *Smacks him*

Angel never seemed to take total responsibility for any decision he made, and I noticed with this last plan of his, he fell right back into his old patterns... *Shakes head*

Thanks again sweetie!

*Snuggles*

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