Fic: Under the Covers. Hisagi/Kira.

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Title: Under the Covers
Rating: NC-17
Pairing: Hisagi Shuuhei/Kira Izuru
Summary: Our boys on a cold winter night. ♥
Notes/Warnings: For the shuukira Christmas Challenge, using the prompt "Snow". Also written for Theme #36: Melt @ 50scenes.
Disclaimer: I do not own Bleach or any of its sexy characters. I just borrow them and make them do my nasty bidding. They

Comments

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What do you mean you'd die if you were them?! They just had hot, snow-melting smexy tiems! I'd totally put up with living in a cold country if it got me some of that! XDDDDDDD

I love yoru writing style

::blushes:: Thank you. ^^ I'm really glad the effort pays off!

AND YEY AM LOOKING FORWARD TO MORE SHUUKIRA LOVE! The comm has been a little too quiet lately!

Thank you for reading and commenting! ♥

[ceestar]

"You can’t make me,” the blond grumbled

"Should I stop?"/"If you want to die."

"I meant inside me, idiot."

“Are you-are you all right?”

...just some of my favoruite lines! I think there were more but my brain has turned to putty!! Antha, I'm not you realise it, but you are far too hard on yourself!

What is wonderful about your smut is that it is hardly ever about the smut itself. It is about the connection of the characters, like how Shuuhei is so rough but still needs to know Izuru is alright. Or how quiet, polite Kira Izuru will call Shuuhei things like idiot, and bastard in the middle of them making love~
Of course between all this you still write brilliant smut with details and well chosen words that just make the reader lose themselves in the moment- not unlike the boys losing themselves.

(By the way, I adore your Shuu, and I adore the way your Izuru treats him even more!)

... and don't go thanking me, silly! I didn't do anything!

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Eek! No, Cee, really. When I told you it was bad, it was really bad. I had to work extra hard for two days just to make this decent! That plot bunny, while very motivating, must have been high on crack or something! But the effort really paid off! ♥

What is wonderful about your smut is that it is hardly ever about the smut itself. / Of course between all this you still write brilliant smut with details and well chosen words that just make the reader lose themselves in the moment.

::blushes:: Bawwww You are too kind. I'm really glad you think so; I always try hard not to make these two have cheap and half-assed smut because that'd just ruin the image of these two and make their relationship seem shallow. ShuuKira is a totally dignified pairing in my book!

And Bb, do I really have to tell you I would have never gotten this out at all if it weren't for you? You always told me I could do it and that counts for a lot. My love for this pairing and fandom has also rekindled and now I am not trying to cling to it--I'm really still in it--

[ceestar]

♥♥♥

[doxxed_up]

I needed this ^_^ We're in the middle of a heat wave so the feeling is nice.
<3

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Just think: Shuuhei and Izuru trying to cool each other off. That ought to make the heat wave a little more bearable. XD

Glad you enjoyed it! Thank you for reading and commenting! ♥

[silverharmony]

You write so well. *A* I actually particularly like Izuru in this fic. It's nice to see him have a bit of an attitude for once, and yet it's still realistic (and you can totally understand why xDDD). And ohhh, Shuuhei. Shuuhei would never be Shuuhei without the dorkiness that makes you wanna headwall.

So lovely to see 'em get hot on a cold winter's day. <33

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Bawwwwwww you are too kind. ::blushes::

And hur hur feisty&demanding!Izuru is just so much fun, ne? ♥

Thank you for reading and commenting! ♥

[flying_embers]

Oh to be bundling with a lover under the blanket in a winter night... <3

Thank you for this beautiful Christmas gift! I really love your Kira here, particularly his last line. And Shuuhei, so creative XD

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Oh to be bundling with a lover under the blanket in a winter night...

Mmmmmm...especially if it's with either of these two boys (or better yet, both). 8D

Glad you enjoyed it! Feisty&Demanding!Izuru for the win! :D

Thank you for reading and commenting! ♥