Fic: Static (3/?). Hisagi/Kira.

[winteraconite]

Title: Static (3/?)
Author: winteraconite
Rating: PG-13
Pairing: Hisagi Shuuhei/Kira Izuru
Notes/Warnings: Yaoi. ANGST. This is actually a late (like whoa) birthday gift to two of my favorite persons here in LJ: barukode and annieroo2. Also written for prompt #32: Regret @ 50scenes.
General Summary: Betrayal is a blade that cuts deep, and you have to wonder who you can really trust.

Comments

[annieroo2]

You wrote FIC for me?!! *dances*

Oh how I loved Matsumoto and Yumichika in this chapter. Oh yes I did!! I loved Matsumoto's quiet understanding and manipulations almost as I loved Yumichika's blatant and confrontational banter with Hisagi.

But truly I wanted to kick the boys in the shins for their stupidity. And then worry for what will happen.

You did a lovely job and I look forward to more when your inspiration strikes. :D

[winteraconite]

YES, I DID BECAUSE I LOVE YOU THIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIS MUCH! I'm only sorry I couldn't post it on time. Gah. PHAIL. T_T

But YEY am glad you liked Matsumoto and Yumichika! It took me a while to decide which characters I was going to give the roles to and I think I've made the right choice. These two are just too awesome!

And lol yes, well, I love being mean to my boys. I can't help but make them miserable. :D

I'm really glad you liked it! Have already started working on the fourth chapter! ^^

[yukika_byaren]

Pleeeease promise me Izuru is coming back ALIVE!

Such beautiful angst! I love this story.

[winteraconite]

Oh, dear! You didn't have to leave me a comment here, too! But lol thank you!

Aaaaaaaaand ahahaha I really can't promise you anything, dearie. ^^ *evil laugh*

Thank you for reading and commenting!

[kwansan]

Late comment is sooo late ~_~ But I'm still reading!!

Pride. It can really be such a powerful thing, despite the downfalls of arrogance and stubbornness that may come with it. I love how you made Hisagi repeat Yumichika's words. It irked me a bit that he said them, but at the same time, it drew everything so nicely together.

Then he paused outside the door for a second...two seconds...three...before storming down the hall and savagely crushing the hope that his friend would call him back.
Hisagi, ladjsfl;a I STILL WANT TO SMACK YOU D< But the angst is too good.

You're doing a wonderful job, and I don't mind waiting for the chapters to come out. I can't wait for the next one~ ♥

[winteraconite]

Pride does not pay!

I love how you made Hisagi repeat Yumichika's words. It irked me a bit that he said them,

That part still makes me wince (poor Izuru) but it was necessary. (But honestly if someone said that to me I'd go bankai on their asses XD).

Shuuhei is the biggest idiot in the universe for doing what he did to Izuru and Izuru is such a bitch for reacting the way he did but we love it!!!!!!!!! XD

Hopefully, you won't have to wait too long for the next chapter! I mean, it's right here collecting dust in my folders. The damn thing won't let me end it but I'll keep trying! XD

Thank you for reading and commenting! ♥