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winyumi

One That Got Away

Apr 09, 2009 08:20

Well, here goes nothing. This is my first Supernatural fic ever. This is terrifying ( Read more... )

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zubeneschamali April 9 2009, 15:36:11 UTC

Don't be terrified, be proud. Man, that was awesome! I love outsider POVs, and this one was done very well. The last line was especially heartbreaking, because of course *we* know this doctor made a huge difference, even if he'll never know. Great job, and I hope you'll write more!

winyumi April 9 2009, 21:10:49 UTC

Thank you so much for commenting! I had a *lot* of trouble with the ending so it's really nice to hear that the last line worked for you.

Also, I love your icon very much.

zubeneschamali April 18 2009, 04:10:17 UTC

Thank you so much for commenting! I had a *lot* of trouble with the ending so it's really nice to hear that the last line worked for you.

You're very welcome. I always have trouble with the last line of a story, so I appreciate a good one when I see it.

Also, I love your icon very much.

Thank you! I had the lyric in my head for a while before I found a good picture to go with it.

starbright73 April 9 2009, 16:45:54 UTC

What an amazing first fic! You should really be proud! I love the outside POV; the enigma it brigs forth even though we get another view thanks to our knowledge of Sam's life.

Wonderful fic so keep them coming!

winyumi April 9 2009, 21:16:35 UTC

Thank you so much for taking the time to comment and for such supportive feedback. I love outsider POVs too, in case you hadn't guessed. :)

isha_chan April 9 2009, 17:08:30 UTC

When I read the summary I decided to give it a try. Normally I save long fanfics for later but this time? I couldn't stop^^

It was really interesting to see the Winchester's not through their eyes. I feel a bit sorry for Jonathan because he might never see Sam again.

The story was really great! Thank you for posting \^^/ Now I feel like watching old episodes of Supernatural ^^

*saves the story for reading again*

winyumi April 9 2009, 21:21:54 UTC

Aw, thank you so much for your comments.

I feel bad for poor Jonathan too. I did have an alternate ending planned where Nancy finally agreed to go out with him. I scrapped it cause it was too happy and I'm evil.

gidgetgal9 April 9 2009, 21:02:02 UTC

Awesome- loved this. Thanks for posting it! :0)

winyumi April 9 2009, 21:23:05 UTC

That's really good to hear :) Thank you for commenting!

tla3jm1 April 9 2009, 22:06:40 UTC

That was an amazing first fic. Hope you keep them coming. Thanks for sharing with us.

winyumi April 10 2009, 20:16:53 UTC

You're welcome. Thank you for taking the time to comment!